http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslGeneralEnglishGrammar-Questions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here. <font color=red>DO NOT post paragraphs and compositions here. Post them in our <a href="http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm"><b>Essay, Report and Composition Writing Forum</b></a>.</font>enXMOD (Build: 3614.32638)http://www.englishforums.com/English/AQuestionAboutSentenceReview/jlvcw/post.htm#807800Sun, 05 Jul 2009 20:14:09 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:807800denna10010http://www.englishforums.com/English/AQuestionAboutSentenceReview/jlvcw/post.htm#807800http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-807800.xmlThank you! I see your point about the first sentence. Can you tell me what rule would the sentence followed under? I mean the one where you leave the comma in. I need to study it.http://www.englishforums.com/English/AQuestionAboutSentenceReview/jlvcw/post.htm#807752Sun, 05 Jul 2009 19:16:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:807752Grammar Geek1http://www.englishforums.com/English/AQuestionAboutSentenceReview/jlvcw/post.htm#807752http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-807752.xmlNo, but the original is not correct either. All of those things - a walker who was trained and who is a friend - describe Mercy, not Mercy&#39;s world. It would actually be improved by leaving the comma, but changing &quot;Mercy&#39;s world&quot; to &quot;Mercy lives in a world that&quot;http://www.englishforums.com/English/AQuestionAboutSentenceReview/jlvcw/post.htm#807738Sun, 05 Jul 2009 19:10:19 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:807738denna10012http://www.englishforums.com/English/AQuestionAboutSentenceReview/jlvcw/post.htm#807738http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-807738.xmlA walker raised by werewolves, trained in mechanics by a fae and friend to vampire and ghost(. )Mercy&#39;s world is far from ordinary. I change the comma to a period, is it correct?http://www.englishforums.com/English/AQuestionAboutSentenceReview/jlvcw/post.htm#806997Sun, 05 Jul 2009 07:41:04 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:806997Mister Micawber3http://www.englishforums.com/English/AQuestionAboutSentenceReview/jlvcw/post.htm#806997http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-806997.xmlWhere would you like to put the period?http://www.englishforums.com/English/AQuestionAboutSentenceReview/jlvcw/post.htmSun, 05 Jul 2009 06:41:36 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:806930denna10014http://www.englishforums.com/English/AQuestionAboutSentenceReview/jlvcw/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-806930.xmlHi, I was wondering if the sentence below is correct. A walker raised by werewolves, trained in mechanics by a fae and friend to vampire and ghost, Mercy&#39;s world is far from ordinary . Shouldn&#39;t the sentence containing Mercy&#39;s world have a period instead of a comma?