http://www.englishforums.com/English/Poetry/Forum13.htmPoets.. come one, come all.enXMOD (Build: 3715.30106)http://www.englishforums.com/English/WorkingWonders/bwdqd/post.htm#124330Mon, 22 Jun 2009 05:03:11 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:124330Dj Bueno0http://www.englishforums.com/English/WorkingWonders/bwdqd/post.htm#124330http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-124330.xmlThanks ok I will.http://www.englishforums.com/English/WorkingWonders/bwdqd/post.htm#124328Tue, 22 Sep 2009 05:03:11 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:124328anita_a1http://www.englishforums.com/English/WorkingWonders/bwdqd/post.htm#124328http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-124328.xmlThis is a good poem. I liked the first 3 stanzas.Frankly, the last 2 stanzas don't go well with them.Post more of your work for us.http://www.englishforums.com/English/WorkingWonders/bwdqd/post.htmWed, 22 Jul 2009 05:03:11 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:123967Dj Bueno2http://www.englishforums.com/English/WorkingWonders/bwdqd/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-123967.xmlAs the birds fly in the sky I'll give you two presents Seagulls taught me how to choose A sparkle from the sun And a fabulous blue after the cruise. During the splendid sunset I'll hire smart jet By using some colorful smokes I'll draw huge hearts in a plate. When the dark rules the night Moonlight will be my guide I'll quieten all the noises down Since only for you nigtingales Will be singing a ballad. With the help of an inspring breeze I'll take pictures of the calm seas Later I'll smarten them up <FONT fa