http://www.englishforums.com/English/Poetry/Forum13.htmPoets.. come one, come all.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyLovePoem/bqkvc/post.htm#165482Mon, 26 Jan 2009 06:11:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:165482Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyLovePoem/bqkvc/post.htm#165482http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-165482.xml(?She actually threatens you?), I mean she did bad thing to mehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/MyLovePoem/bqkvc/post.htm#165420Mon, 26 Jan 2009 06:11:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:165420YoHf1http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyLovePoem/bqkvc/post.htm#165420http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-165420.xmlAnonymous wrote: Here It was my poem, That I was write this morning, Please correct any mistakes. You cannot see the pain deep inside me I alway smile whenever you were happy with other guy But inside me, Like the flame burning my heart. You will never known how much I love you. Because you never love someone as much as I love you. No matter how you threaten me. But I still love you more. One thing I don't know why. I dosen't really matter how I try, But It keep falling. Please tell me how to get inside you. Here is my poem I wrote this morning, Please correct any mistakes. You cannot see the pain deep inside me I would smile whenever you whttp://www.englishforums.com/English/MyLovePoem/bqkvc/post.htmTue, 26 May 2009 05:11:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:165089Anonymous2http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyLovePoem/bqkvc/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-165089.xmlHere It was my poem, That I was write this morning, Please correct any mistakes. You cannot see the pain deep inside me I alway smile whenever you were happy with other guy But inside me, Like the flame burning my heart. You will never known how much I love you. Because you never love someone as much as I love you. No matter how you threaten me. But I still love you more. One thing I don't know why. I dosen't really matter how I try, But It keep falling. Please tell me how to get inside you.