http://www.englishforums.com/English/Poetry/Forum13.htmPoets.. come one, come all.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhenLightsDownQuickPoem/dqwcg/post.htm#331930Sun, 26 Apr 2009 09:32:35 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:331930Rigel0http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhenLightsDownQuickPoem/dqwcg/post.htm#331930http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-331930.xmlwell I don't want to change it, but I think there are mistakes I can't see and it woul be useful to know them ^^ bot grammatical and style errorshttp://www.englishforums.com/English/WhenLightsDownQuickPoem/dqwcg/post.htm#331693Thu, 26 Mar 2009 10:32:35 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:331693Mister Micawber1http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhenLightsDownQuickPoem/dqwcg/post.htm#331693http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-331693.xmlIf you're not going to change it, I'm not going to bother.http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhenLightsDownQuickPoem/dqwcg/post.htmSun, 26 Apr 2009 09:32:35 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:331523Rigel2http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhenLightsDownQuickPoem/dqwcg/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-331523.xmlthis one was written about 4 years ago and my English's knowledge was lesser than now. It was also written in a very impulsive way, in a dark period of my life. I haven't changed the text even knowing there are lots of errors because it represents a part of my life and I like how it turned out. I'm not going to change it, but comments and critiques are appreciated. WHEN THE LIGHTS ARE DOWN Living in fear you don't know why your mind get crazy you can't understand it at all. Living in fear get restless and blind your life no longer yours but what's controlling you. Pain-all around pain-in you pain-can't get out of this *** pain-yor most known enemy. Your friends-gone your love-too your soul-none your heart-empty. You and your solitude...