http://www.englishforums.com/English/Poetry/Forum13.htmPoets.. come one, come all.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PoemsHelpPlease/vvbqh/post.htmTue, 27 Jan 2009 02:41:49 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:354304Akira0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PoemsHelpPlease/vvbqh/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-354304.xmlHey there. I was wondering if someone can edit/review these poems for me please! Foxhole Zigzag. Cramped and contaminated. Secure by the parados, but only by the rear. Surrounded by nothing but filth and stench of blood. Geography of the Trenches. Lines. Front and support. Bombarding and barraging. Reserve. Watching, waiting, and entertained by the overflowing latrines. Rest. Enjoying the luxurious gravel like a soccer ball on turf. Life in the Trenches. Weapons. Artillery and mining, domination. Odor and sight like dead dead rats on a sunny hot day, chlorine gas neutralized. <- (does the dead rats work w/ the chlorine gas?) Maxine and Vickers, adequate. Lee and Ross, not so much. Warfare in the Trenches. Casulaties. Sanitary...