http://www.englishforums.com/English/Poetry/Forum13.htmPoets.. come one, come all.enCSMOD (Build: 3191.21962)http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zlvwv/post.htm#472944Tue, 05 Feb 2008 12:25:36 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:472944The White Rose3http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zlvwv/post.htm#472944http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-472944.xml<P>well done , I liked it.</P><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zjbhr/post.htm#462230Wed, 09 Jan 2008 13:38:33 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:462230Viki Teen4http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zjbhr/post.htm#462230http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-462230.xml&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Nice work, but do you find it too complicated? Though some sentences are unuseless, but you better cut down some.<br><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zwhql/post.htm#459215Tue, 01 Jan 2008 18:36:31 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:459215Uyasar5http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zwhql/post.htm#459215http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-459215.xmlreally good!<br><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zhhnm/post.htm#454252Mon, 17 Dec 2007 20:21:18 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:454252Anonymous3http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zhhnm/post.htm#454252http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-454252.xmlthe wording is confusing, no real point. a few lines a kinda childish, and immaturely written.&nbsp; it didn't steal my heart.<div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zhcvb/post.htm#452643Thu, 13 Dec 2007 06:00:01 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:452643Blue-eyed Smiler4http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zhcvb/post.htm#452643http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-452643.xmlFantastic!Oh, compatriot, your poems are awesome, I especially liked the first one.If you want to take a heart of a girl- just show this poem, that is so damn romantic<img src="/emoticons/emotion-23.gif" alt="Girl [X]" /><br><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zzmqd/post.htm#445913Sat, 24 Nov 2007 21:12:27 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:445913julielai5http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zzmqd/post.htm#445913http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-445913.xml<P>You need to work on your iambs if you want to write a sonnet.</P><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zzmvp/post.htm#445721Sat, 24 Nov 2007 08:23:40 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:445721Dew 20076http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zzmvp/post.htm#445721http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-445721.xml*** <br />I raise my eyes and see the cold sky <br />It’s like a kind of wall so mighty great <br />That separates me from the land of thine <br />And puts me fully in the hands of fate. <br /> <br />You’re far away behind this gloomy sky <br />My lips can’t touch you in a gentle kiss. <br />And snobbish clouds passing low by <br />Will not remind me of my dear Miss. <br /> <br />My cry can’t reach you, but why should I cry, <br />If all the sounds die imprisoned here? <br />The Heavens won’t let me even try <br />To join my faithfully beloved dear. <br /> <br />But no matter how the Heavens try <br />The Love is stronger than the gloomy sky! <br />http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zzmvd/post.htmSat, 24 Nov 2007 06:40:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:445709Dew 20077http://www.englishforums.com/English/ToAGirl/zzmvd/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-445709.xml*** <br />A girl of dream or distant blinking star? <br />You are so close, still you are so far. <br />I want to reach you, touch your tender hand, <br />But I’m afraid that you’ll misunderstand… <br /> <br />The heart and soul of mine is filled with you, <br />And no one will tell me what to do. <br />Should I escape from feelings and the Love? <br />Or should I yield to it and fly above? <br /> <br />You come to me in dreams. I see your face, <br />I feel your breath so close in my embrace. <br />In dreams I taste your lips and touch your skin <br />And I’m as happy as I’ve never been. <br /> <br />Oh, dear! What am I to do? <br />You can’t be mine, I can’t help loving you. <br />