http://www.englishforums.com/English/Poetry/Forum13.htmPoets.. come one, come all.enXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#67692Thu, 23 Apr 2009 00:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:67692Pea330http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#67692http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-67692.xmlIt can't be true Till I hear it from you It can't be true You'd never do That to me But what I see Leads me to believe That you have lost you purityhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61667Mon, 23 Mar 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:61667Pea331http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61667http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-61667.xmlThat's what I thought too Sweet and simple!http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61463Mon, 23 Feb 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:61463vbblueeyes2http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61463http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-61463.xmlits cool keep it simple thats the best way to be vbhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61460Fri, 23 Jan 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:61460Pea333http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61460http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-61460.xmlHey thanks I'm not sure what else I would add. I kinda like it simplehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61291Fri, 23 Jan 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:61291vbblueeyes4http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61291http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-61291.xmlthis is really cool add more vbhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61251Fri, 23 Jan 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:61251Pea335http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61251http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-61251.xmlI heard the other night a few loud pop's. and my imagination got ahold of me and i started picturing this and it made me want to write this er .... poem .http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61248Mon, 23 Feb 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:61248Pea336http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61248http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-61248.xmlThe pop of the shot The sounds of a scream No way to explain This eternal scene Burned into my head Of this person dead Won't take the shame Not the one to blamehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61246Fri, 23 Jan 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:61246Pea337http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61246http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-61246.xmlI was inspired to write the poem "Window" while I was laying in my bed looking out the window one night.http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61245Sat, 23 May 2009 00:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:61245Pea338http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/2/mvhq/Post.htm#61245http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-61245.xmlWinds blow Branches show The music slow My heart to gohttp://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#61243Thu, 23 Apr 2009 00:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:61243Pea339http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#61243http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-61243.xmlAdd somethings has to change dont know what or how to the end of "failure" Thanks too ybblueeyes for the suggestion for the ending!http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60476Mon, 23 Mar 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:60476Pea3310http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60476http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-60476.xmlThanks!http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60467Mon, 23 Mar 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:60467bhejafry11http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60467http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-60467.xmlnice ..........keep it uphttp://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60253Sat, 23 May 2009 00:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:60253Pea3312http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60253http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-60253.xmlI'm hurt, lost, confused and fooled. I cry inside, breath alone, scared of the unkown. Closed, done, tired and killed. My life is damaged and undone. Gonna getaway from the real, breakaway and heal. Erase the pain underneath. Get loose, forget the numb. Belong to a memory of hapiness. No longer wasted, lonely or hidden. On the floor.http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60252Mon, 23 Mar 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:60252Pea3313http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60252http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-60252.xmlI feel broken inside, left behind Lost in my way on this accursed day I feel the hurt pound, afraid to turn around Don't want to see when I look at me.http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60250Mon, 23 Mar 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:60250Pea3314http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60250http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-60250.xmlNone of these thoughts go away and all the pain attached to them I wonder why I shot myself in the back again All of these people crowd me and all the things they say and then I wonder why they won't go away and then I turn around and see you, the pain I hate goes and then I cry and cover my face again Surrounded by embarassment and memories. -Inspired by a song by Linkin Park.http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60249Mon, 23 Feb 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:60249Pea3315http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60249http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-60249.xmlI anyone has any suggestions on how to make my poems better please let me know. In Failure- I'm not sure how to end it, any suggestions? It doesn't seem right to me.http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60248Mon, 23 Feb 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:60248Pea3316http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htm#60248http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-60248.xmlI feel as a failure When you're around here Much better than me As I could ever be So many friends So many talents I turn all these bends My feelings so valid I love you as ever But you hurt me forever I don't want to leave you But I can't believe youhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htmFri, 23 Jan 2009 01:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:60247Pea3317http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyPoems/mvhq/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-60247.xmlI just recently made a new thread of a poem then I thought I might as well just make a thread for all of my poems. So I guess I'll just post one here whenever I write a new one.