http://www.englishforums.com/English/Poetry/Forum13.htmPoets.. come one, come all.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/2/bdlnm/Post.htm#101672Sat, 21 May 2005 02:28:16 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:101672anita_a4http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/2/bdlnm/Post.htm#101672http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-101672.xmlThanks again Mr.P <br /> <br />I am Love <br /> <br />I sneak into the eyes <br />Of the damsel in distress <br />Looking at the man <br />Who saved her <br />I am Love <br /> <br />I peek into the house <br />Of the girl next door <br />Who has met a man <br />On her way home <br />I am Love <br /> <br />I stand with the man <br />Who adorably writes <br />Love songs for the girl <br />That reigns in his heart <br />I am Love <br /> <br />I comfort the man <br />With a broken heart <br />Which his girl threw away <br />With me in it <br />I am Love <br /> <br />I am there everywhere <br />I am Love <br />Do you want me <br />In your heart today? <br />http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bdlmj/post.htm#101652Sat, 21 May 2005 01:18:14 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:101652MrPedantic6http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bdlmj/post.htm#101652http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-101652.xmlHello Anita! <br /> <br />I think you would have to say: 'reigns in his heart'. <br /> <br />I wasn't sure about the last 4 lines. Do the tone and rhythm change too much, I wonder? What do you think? <br /> <br />It seems the kind of poem that could take a simple refrain, e.g. <br /> <br />I peek into the house <br />Of the girl next door <br />Who has met a man <br />On her way home <br />    <EM>I am Love</EM> <br /> <br />MrPhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bdlwn/post.htm#101588Fri, 20 May 2005 20:47:47 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:101588anita_a2http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bdlwn/post.htm#101588http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-101588.xmlThanks Maj.http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bcqjl/post.htm#98135Tue, 10 May 2005 21:57:38 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:98135maj3http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bcqjl/post.htm#98135http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-98135.xmlI hear the heart of my man <br />who promised me a fan <br />in the heat of the sun.http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bcqgg/post.htm#98079Tue, 10 May 2005 16:55:45 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:98079anita_a4http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bcqgg/post.htm#98079http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-98079.xmlThanks all of u, friends. glad that u liked it.http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bcpxc/post.htm#97922Tue, 10 May 2005 07:28:39 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:97922thatsalok5http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bcpxc/post.htm#97922http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-97922.xmlYeah really Very Nice!, I Believe, One day i will write poetry like this!http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bcpmb/post.htm#97887Tue, 10 May 2005 05:31:23 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:97887rainadaman6http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bcpmb/post.htm#97887http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-97887.xmlgood onehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bcpvq/post.htm#97766Mon, 09 May 2005 19:59:35 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:97766draggin_nfsug7http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bcpvq/post.htm#97766http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-97766.xmlthat is so true about love and lifehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bcpvk/post.htm#97760Mon, 09 May 2005 19:37:53 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:97760anita_a8http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bcpvk/post.htm#97760http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-97760.xmlAny comments friends?http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bclqv/post.htmFri, 06 May 2005 17:04:47 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:96802anita_a9http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAmLove/bclqv/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments13-96802.xmlI am Love <br /> <br />I sneak into the eyes <br />Of the damsel in distress <br />Looking at the man <br />Who saved her <br /> <br />I peek into the house <br />Of the girl next door <br />Who has met a man <br />On her way home <br /> <br />I stand with the man <br />Who adorably writes <br />Love songs for the girl <br />That reigns his heart <br /> <br />I comfort the man <br />With a broken heart <br />Which his girl threw away <br />With me in it <br /> <br />I am there everywhere <br /> <br />Do you want me <br />In your heart today? <br />