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<?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="http://www.englishforums.com/utility/FeedStylesheets/rss.xsl" media="screen"?><rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>General English Vocabulary &amp; Idiom Questions</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeneralEnglishVocabularyIdiom-Questions/Forum29.htm</link><description>Help with defining words and idioms, and new words and idioms that you've learnt</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>XMOD (Build: 3614.32638)</generator><item><title>Re: Please correct my sentences.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMySentences/zvdgb/post.htm#438674</link><pubDate>Fri, 23 Jan 2009 23:47:43 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:438674</guid><dc:creator>Philip</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMySentences/zvdgb/post.htm#438674</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments29-438674.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Anonymous wrote:    Hi, thank you for your responses. How about this?  'The number of doctors in country A is one fifth of that in country B.'  Does this work?       This sentence reads well .</description></item><item><title>Re: Please correct my sentences.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMySentences/zvdgb/post.htm#438656</link><pubDate>Thu, 23 Apr 2009 22:47:43 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:438656</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMySentences/zvdgb/post.htm#438656</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments29-438656.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi, thank you for your responses. 
 
How about this? 
 
'The number of doctors in country A is one fifth of that in country B.' 
 
Does this work?</description></item><item><title>Re: Please correct my sentences.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMySentences/zvdgb/post.htm#438328</link><pubDate>Sat, 23 May 2009 22:47:43 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:438328</guid><dc:creator>Philip</dc:creator><slash:comments>2</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMySentences/zvdgb/post.htm#438328</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments29-438328.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>I see no need for 'the' before 'country'. I agree with Marius.</description></item><item><title>Re: Please correct my sentences.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMySentences/zvdgb/post.htm#438279</link><pubDate>Thu, 23 Apr 2009 22:47:43 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:438279</guid><dc:creator>Marius Hancu</dc:creator><slash:comments>3</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMySentences/zvdgb/post.htm#438279</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments29-438279.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Use 2, 1 is awkward</description></item><item><title>Please correct my sentences.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMySentences/zvdgb/post.htm</link><pubDate>Thu, 23 Apr 2009 22:47:43 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:438227</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>4</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMySentences/zvdgb/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments29-438227.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi. 
There are two countries. 
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The number of doctors in the country A: 10000 
The number of doctors in the country B: 50000 
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I explain the above situation as follows. 
 
(1) There are four fifth fewer doctors in the country A than in the country B. 
 
(2) There are 80 percent fewer doctors in the cuontry A than in the country B. 
 
Is there anything wrong with these sentences? 
Also, if you were I, how would you express the situation?</description></item></channel></rss>