Business & Finance Englishhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/BusinessFinanceEnglish/Forum33.htmMeetings, negotiations, marketing and international trade are only some of the areas you can find here.enXMOD (Build: 3615.39139)Re: What do native speakers think of this marketing text style? Thank you!http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhatNativeSpeakersMarketingText-StyleThank/dqwxn/post.htm#331807Sat, 25 Apr 2009 01:06:08 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:331807Kedra0http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhatNativeSpeakersMarketingText-StyleThank/dqwxn/post.htm#331807http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments33-331807.xmlHi Mister Micawber, wow, you changed the first paragraph upside down! I've never thought it might be changed that much. Thank you very much for your assistance!Re: What do native speakers think of this marketing text style? Thank you!http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhatNativeSpeakersMarketingText-StyleThank/dqwxn/post.htm#331754Wed, 25 Feb 2009 02:06:08 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:331754Mister Micawber1http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhatNativeSpeakersMarketingText-StyleThank/dqwxn/post.htm#331754http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments33-331754.xmlDocument your financial relationships Operators of large vacation rental websites have owners from different countries with different local laws , so it is hard to control all the agreements/negotiations between property owners and tenants, but a small vacation rental website dedicated to one specific country or region shows more professionalism and generates more trust if it offers rental agreements prepared on behalf of property owners and guests . If you operate a website dedicated to one region, you can compose legal documents valid for your region and appropiate for your owners and guests . Such rental agreements should describe the most likely disputes that can arise between owner and guest: furniture and...What do native speakers think of this marketing text style? Thank you!http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhatNativeSpeakersMarketingText-StyleThank/dqwxn/post.htmWed, 25 Feb 2009 02:06:08 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:331734Kedra2http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhatNativeSpeakersMarketingText-StyleThank/dqwxn/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments33-331734.xmlThe below passage is an abstract from the article I am writing. The article is dedicated to the advantages of being an owner of the small vacation rental web site instead of a large international vacation rental portal. I am interested very much in its style, does it sound English? I will appreciate if someone could correct me both in style and grammar. Thank you very much in advance. Document your financial relationships Small vacation rental web site, dedicated to one specific country or region, shows more professionalism and generates more trust if it offers property owners and guests to sign rental agreements. Being the owner of large vacation rental web site you have owners from different countries with different local...