Re: Lecture

Avangi — Wed, 26 Mar 2008 00:09:34 GMT

Nowadays there are greater and greater desires for (Too bloody much!) Nowadays there is a need (your use of comparatives - faster, more reliable, safer - makes "greater and greater" unnecessary, or somewhat redundant.) for a faster etc system which demands a / the precise choice

technology. But this (sentence is too long) "well known" hyphenated??

, but is still in the initial way and is going to be improved, consider using parentheses here?? (but / which is still in the initial stages etc.

~~Authors of research work~~ Researchers Too wordy!

The system consists of a microcontroller, an RFID etc., etc. ( if these items are singular you should use the article)

If a compteitor the RFID reader and passes it through?? The microcontroller then saves it All of these singular nouns to the end of your piece need articles!!!

I'm beginning to wonder what you mean by a "competitor." Are we talking about industrial espionage here, or sales??? Is this suspect a client, or a customer, or what?

along accurate time of detection Do you mean, "along with the exact time of detection"?

I never heard "orienteering." sorry.

that logicality of usage RFID station "the logistical placement of the RFID station"? "the logical location for the RFID station"???

is partially conditional with GSM plug-in "is dependent on the availability of GSM plug-ins" ??

In your last sentence, I'm still confused as to what you mean by "comptetions" or "competitors."

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Anonymous — Tue, 25 Mar 2008 22:50:57 GMT

Hi,

I'm writing a research work and now I have to translate key words documentation to English. Could you please help me and correct possible mistakes below? I'm in a little hurry. Thanks in advance.

Nowadays there are greater and greater desires for faster, more reliable, safer and automated unified system of marking and tracking various products, which demands precise choice of advanced information technology, but this exceeds the usage of now well known bar code. There are new solutions nowadays, which allow more accurate control and identification. One of those new technologies that already works well, but is still in the initial way and is going to be improved, is called radiofrequency identification or briefly RFID. Authors of research work developed a system for identification radiofrequency tags and implemented it in foot orienteering matches. System consists of microcontroller, RFID reader, GSM modem and stabilized power supply. If competitor with compatible RF tag is near, RFID reader checks his unique identification number and serves it through communications lines to microcontroller. Microcontroller then saves it to temporary memory and delivers it along accurate time of detection to GSM modem, which sends SMS with all included data to recipient. Such system allows automatic registration of competitors on arrival to individual orienteering check points, where identification and timing of competitors is logged. They have come to conclusion that logicality of usage RFID station for reading RF tags is partially conditional with GSM plug-in. They cannot tolerate mistakes and instability in electronic devices on competitions, so in this case, implementation of GSM modems in necessary.

ESL General Science and Technology English

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