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Please post only &lt;b&gt;&lt;font color=red&gt;easy&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/b&gt; questions and answers here.</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>XMOD (Build: 3616.28671)</generator><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/5/vdhww/Post.htm#748155</link><pubDate>Tue, 26 May 2009 03:05:38 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:748155</guid><dc:creator>Mister Micawber</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/5/vdhww/Post.htm#748155</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-748155.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>.  Or:   I&amp;#39;m the only daughter in my family, you know. I know.    I&amp;#39;m the only daughter in my family. You know I know.   I&amp;#39;m the only daughter. In my family, you know. I know.    or....?</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/5/vdhww/Post.htm#748141</link><pubDate>Tue, 26 May 2009 02:59:05 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:748141</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/5/vdhww/Post.htm#748141</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-748141.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi, 
 i&amp;#39;m the ony daughter in my family. you know i know.      
  
 I&amp;#39;m the only daughter in my family. You know. I know.     
  
 Clive</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/5/vdhww/Post.htm#747843</link><pubDate>Mon, 25 May 2009 23:50:17 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:747843</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>2</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/5/vdhww/Post.htm#747843</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-747843.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>i&amp;#39;m the ony daughter in my family. you know i know.</description></item><item><title>Re:  Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/5/vdhww/Post.htm#699884</link><pubDate>Tue, 21 Apr 2009 23:38:02 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:699884</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><slash:comments>3</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/5/vdhww/Post.htm#699884</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-699884.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>behind of phi pc has ic gone i have complained that it will repaire after two days 
 
  
 Sorry, Anon, I&amp;#39;m a bit confused about what &amp;quot;phi pc&amp;quot; means, or what &amp;quot;ic gone&amp;quot; means. 
  
 It sounds like you have complained that it will take two days to repair the PC, but I can&amp;#39;t figure out the problem.</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/5/vdhww/Post.htm#699664</link><pubDate>Tue, 21 Apr 2009 07:01:04 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:699664</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>4</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/5/vdhww/Post.htm#699664</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-699664.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>behind of phi pc has ic gone i have complained that it will repaire after two days</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#675302</link><pubDate>Wed, 18 Feb 2009 22:10:28 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:675302</guid><dc:creator>Mister Micawber</dc:creator><slash:comments>5</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#675302</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-675302.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>. I want to meet my friend , who arrived earlier. .</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#675107</link><pubDate>Wed, 18 Feb 2009 17:17:35 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:675107</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>6</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#675107</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-675107.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>I want ot meet with my friend who already came here.</description></item><item><title>Re:  Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#645323</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:645323</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>7</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#645323</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-645323.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>It should be &amp;quot;Between you and me,&amp;quot; not &amp;quot;Between you and I.&amp;quot;</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#614429</link><pubDate>Mon, 26 Jan 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:614429</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><slash:comments>8</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#614429</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-614429.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi, Now she will bring the breakfast in your bed? or is it at your bed? Idiomatically, we say Now she will bring you breakfast in bed.  Clive</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#614283</link><pubDate>Mon, 26 Jan 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:614283</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>9</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#614283</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-614283.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Now she will bring the breakfast in your bed? or is it at your bed?</description></item><item><title>Re: your cat likes me. is this write grammar or not? and why</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#542125</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:542125</guid><dc:creator>Yankee</dc:creator><slash:comments>10</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#542125</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-542125.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Y our cat likes me. I s this  write  right/correct grammar or not? A nd why?  &amp;quot; Y our cat likes me.&amp;quot; Yes, your sentence is fine, but don&amp;#39;t forget to capitalize the first word in every sentence.</description></item><item><title>Re:  Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#542124</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:542124</guid><dc:creator>Yankee</dc:creator><slash:comments>11</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#542124</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-542124.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi Anon You should write it this way: - Between you and me , he is not the best man for the job.</description></item><item><title>Re:  Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#542123</link><pubDate>Tue, 26 May 2009 21:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:542123</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><slash:comments>12</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#542123</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-542123.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>between you and I he is not the best man for the job. 
 
  
 Between you and me, he is not the best man for the job.</description></item><item><title>Re:  Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#542119</link><pubDate>Tue, 26 May 2009 21:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:542119</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>13</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/4/vdhww/Post.htm#542119</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-542119.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>between you and I he is not the best man for the job.</description></item><item><title>your cat likes me. is this write grammar or not? and why</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#521325</link><pubDate>Sun, 26 Apr 2009 21:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:521325</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>14</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#521325</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-521325.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>your cat likes me. is this write grammar or not? and why</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#510888</link><pubDate>Sun, 26 Apr 2009 21:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:510888</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><slash:comments>15</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#510888</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-510888.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi, 
 Can you correct my sentence when I write?  
  
 My father had an actual talent, and he built it by himself 
 &amp;#39;Actual&amp;#39; is not a natural word choice. We don&amp;#39;t speak of &amp;#39;building talent&amp;#39;.  
  My father had a real talent, and he developed it by himself.  
 Best wishes, Clive</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#510654</link><pubDate>Mon, 26 Jan 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:510654</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>16</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#510654</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-510654.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi, 
 &amp;quot;Maintain EOD (End of Day) process. Make sure it runs successfully before the next morning.&amp;quot;   Best wishes, Clive  
  Can you correct my sentence when I write? 
 My father had an actual talent, and he built it by himself</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#501901</link><pubDate>Mon, 26 Jan 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:501901</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><slash:comments>17</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#501901</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-501901.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi, 
  i have a 3 days old Backup of 3.0.0 &amp;lt;&amp;lt;&amp;lt;&amp;gt;&amp;gt;&amp;gt; I have 3 days old backup of a 3.0.0.  
 In both sentence Which one is RIGHT sentence please tell me.? 
 I have a 3-day-old backup of 3.0.0. 
 Best wishes, Clive</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#501871</link><pubDate>Sun, 26 Apr 2009 21:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:501871</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>18</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#501871</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-501871.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>i have a 3 days old Backup of 3.0.0 &amp;lt;&amp;lt;&amp;lt;&amp;gt;&amp;gt;&amp;gt; I have 3 days old backup of a 3.0.0. 
 In both sentence Which one is RIGHT sentence please tell me.?</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#485167</link><pubDate>Tue, 26 May 2009 21:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:485167</guid><dc:creator>Mister Micawber</dc:creator><slash:comments>19</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#485167</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-485167.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>.  Shopping through Internet bookstores is convenient , but some people miss the atmosphere of a traditional bookstore.   .</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#485161</link><pubDate>Mon, 26 Jan 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:485161</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>20</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#485161</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-485161.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Shopping through Internet bookstores is convenient; some people miss the atmosphere of a traditional bookstore.</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#482670</link><pubDate>Sun, 26 Apr 2009 21:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:482670</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><slash:comments>21</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#482670</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-482670.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi, 
 I have sent a letter to my uncle.  
 I have sent a letter to my dad. 
 Both of these sentences are fine 
 Best wishes, Clive</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#482655</link><pubDate>Mon, 26 Jan 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:482655</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>22</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/3/vdhww/Post.htm#482655</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-482655.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>i have sent a letter to my dad</description></item><item><title>Re:  Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#482652</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Mar 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:482652</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>23</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#482652</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-482652.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>I have sent a letter to my uncle. is this sentence is correct?</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#479921</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:479921</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><slash:comments>24</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#479921</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-479921.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Shelters is the plural of shelter but in this case it is one group so it is singular, therefor you use offer. 
 Example I received several offers on repairing my roof. Several plural offers plural 
  
 Anon, I don&amp;#39;t think you quite understand the third person singular and third person plural. 
 The shelter offers . . . is singular. 
 The shelters offer . . . is plural 
 (In your example, offers is a plural noun. The only verb in the sentence is &amp;quot;received&amp;quot; with the subject &amp;quot;I.&amp;quot;)</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#479881</link><pubDate>Sun, 26 Apr 2009 21:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:479881</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>25</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#479881</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-479881.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Shelters is the plural of shelter but in this case it is one group so it is singular, therefor you use offer. 
 Example I received several offers on repairing my roof. Several plural offers plural</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#478584</link><pubDate>Mon, 26 Jan 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:478584</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><slash:comments>26</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#478584</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-478584.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi, 
 Do you have a question about this phrase? 
 Clive</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#478563</link><pubDate>Tue, 26 May 2009 21:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:478563</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>27</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#478563</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-478563.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>more embarrassed.</description></item><item><title>Re:  Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#475442</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:475442</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><slash:comments>28</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#475442</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-475442.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi, No, it&amp;#39;s not a run-on sentence.. Clive</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#475376</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2009 22:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:475376</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><slash:comments>29</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#475376</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-475376.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Shelters for teenage runaways offer/offers a wide variety of services.  Shelters - plural. Offer is the plural form.</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#475372</link><pubDate>Sun, 26 Apr 2009 21:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:475372</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>30</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#475372</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-475372.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Shelters for teenage runaways offer/offers a wide variety of services.</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#453541</link><pubDate>Tue, 26 May 2009 21:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:453541</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><slash:comments>31</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/2/vdhww/Post.htm#453541</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-453541.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi, 
 Is this a run-on sentence? The potential for small numbers of counterfeit bills to be passed in widely dispersed areas presents a new law-enforcement challenge that needs to be met. 
  No, it's not.  
  Clive</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#453539</link><pubDate>Tue, 26 May 2009 21:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:453539</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>32</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#453539</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-453539.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Is this a run-on sentence? The potential for small numbers of
counterfeit bills to be passed in widely dispersed areas presents a new
law-enforcement challenge that needs to be met.</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#359117</link><pubDate>Mon, 26 Jan 2009 22:54:59 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:359117</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>33</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#359117</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-359117.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Kaizar wrote:    Below is a part of my nephew's job description. "Maintain EOD (End of Day) process &amp;amp; make sure its process runs well and it will be finished before next morning"    If someone has to go, let it be I.</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#355729</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Mar 2009 22:54:59 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:355729</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><slash:comments>34</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#355729</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-355729.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Start with a capital letter. 
 Use real words, not text abbreviations. 
 If the person calls you "Aunty" then capitalize that too. 
 Perhaps you mean "Come see Aunty." "Come to Aunty" sounds a little like the person is just walking across the room.</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#355659</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2009 22:54:59 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:355659</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>35</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#355659</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-355659.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>come to aunty and she will take u out for a dinner.</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#351358</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Mar 2009 22:54:59 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:351358</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><slash:comments>36</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#351358</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-351358.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi, 
 Welcome to the Forum. 
 hi i'm bass i speak lirebite english now i want speak a good english  
 Hi, my name is Bass. I speak a little bit of English now, but I want to speak good English. 
 Best wishes, Clive</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#351345</link><pubDate>Tue, 26 May 2009 21:54:59 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:351345</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>37</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#351345</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-351345.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>hi i'm bass i speak lirebite english now i want speak a good english</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#351041</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Mar 2009 22:54:59 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:351041</guid><dc:creator>Kaizar</dc:creator><slash:comments>38</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#351041</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-351041.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Thank you, Clive!</description></item><item><title>Re: Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#351006</link><pubDate>Sun, 26 Apr 2009 21:54:59 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:351006</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><slash:comments>39</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm#351006</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-351006.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi, 
 &amp;quot;Maintain EOD (End of Day) process. Make sure it runs successfully before the next morning.&amp;quot;  
  Best wishes, Clive</description></item><item><title>Would you please correct my sentence?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm</link><pubDate>Mon, 26 Jan 2009 22:54:59 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:350990</guid><dc:creator>Kaizar</dc:creator><slash:comments>40</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/vdhww/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-350990.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Below is a part of my nephew's job description.   "Maintain EOD (End of Day) process &amp;amp; make sure its process runs well and it will be finished before next morning"</description></item></channel></rss>