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Re: please correct my grammar

Anonymous — Sat, 21 Jun 2008 10:27:04 GMT

Say:
It is too late to start production on May15. The shipment due date is May 15, and it is a new model that requires in-line inspection. Please push the production start date back to May 10 because it is necessary to send a ten piece sample to the customer, allow time for the customer to approve and send back to you to put on the production for inspection. If any problem occurs when production begins, please reschedule and notify us ASAP.

What do you think?

~R

Re: please correct my grammar

Susankay — Mon, 28 Apr 2008 01:37:32 GMT

It is too late to start mass production on May 25. The shipment due date is May 15, and this is a new model that will require an in-line inspection. Please push the mass production start-date ahead to May 10. This is necessary so that the 10 pcs shipment sample can be sent to the customer for approval and sign off.

sign back 1 pc to you put on the production line for inspection question. (Not clear what you meanu!!)

If there are problems when the production begins, please reschedule with us ASAP.

please correct my grammar

Anonymous — Sun, 27 Apr 2008 15:55:17 GMT

This is too late to start the mass production on May 25. The shipment due date is May 15, and this is a new model we should required for the in-line inspection. Please push the mass production starts date earlier to May 10, because this is required to send the 10 pcs shipment sample for the customer; take time for customer to approve and sign back 1 pc to you put on the production line for inspection question. In order any problem when the production beings, please reschedule to us ASAP.