http://www.englishforums.com/English/BasicEnglishGrammarQuestions/Forum43.htmFor Basic English ONLY. Please post only <b><font color=red>easy</font></b> questions and answers here.enXMOD (Build: 3615.29165)http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/gvcqx/post.htm#523150Sun, 24 May 2009 18:22:33 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:523150optilang0http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/gvcqx/post.htm#523150http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-523150.xmlPlease help me rewrite this thanks We would also like to invite you to visit our website at www.bluehillcoc.com to listen to various sermons. Thanks Can&#39;t see anything wrong with it, but an alternative is: We would also like to invite you to listen to various sermons on our website, www.bluehilloc.com.http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/gvcqx/post.htm#522966Sat, 24 Jan 2009 19:22:33 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:522966Goodguy401http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/gvcqx/post.htm#522966http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-522966.xmlthanks will someone else took a look at i t. thankshttp://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/gvcqx/post.htm#521655Fri, 24 Apr 2009 18:22:33 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:521655Clive2http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/gvcqx/post.htm#521655http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-521655.xmlHi, Seems OK to me. Clivehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/gvcqx/post.htmSun, 24 May 2009 18:22:33 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:521642Anonymous3http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectSentence/gvcqx/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments43-521642.xmlPlease help me rewrite this thanks We would also like to invite you to visit our website at www.bluehillcoc.com to listen to various sermons. Thanks