http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetter-Writing/Forum5.htmFormal letter-writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, or invitation letter, CVs, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter.enXMOD (Build: 3715.30106)http://www.englishforums.com/English/ILetterMotivationUndergraduateStudy-Uk/bxlml/post.htm#156805Thu, 21 May 2009 18:52:49 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:156805nona the brit0http://www.englishforums.com/English/ILetterMotivationUndergraduateStudy-Uk/bxlml/post.htm#156805http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-156805.xmlHi I've added some initial comments in red. Sort out the structure and post up another draft for help with the final version. Why are you using a capital I for the word incentives throughout? I write to you to apply for the study course "International Tourism Management". I look at this study as a wide qualification to my present education in the job-training (this part does not make sense) for event manager / IHK. What is event manager/IHK? This education (are you talking about the course you wish to take or the course you are already taking, I'm not sure what you mean from here onwards&nbsp takes place in the binary system and encloses (takes not encloses) two years. The practical work in at the agency *** close to Frankfurt...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ILetterMotivationUndergraduateStudy-Uk/bxlml/post.htmTue, 21 Jul 2009 18:52:49 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:155697Maryanny1http://www.englishforums.com/English/ILetterMotivationUndergraduateStudy-Uk/bxlml/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-155697.xmlHi everybody, I need some help to write a very good letter of motivation for my undergraduate study in the united kingdom. You can see I wrote a first version... THANK YOU!! Dear Sir or Madam, I write to you to apply for the study course "International Tourism Management". I look at this study as a wide qualification to my present education in the job-training for event manager / IHK. This education takes place in the binary system and encloses two years. The practical work in the agency *** close to Frankfurt forms the main focus and is completed by the vocational school. The agency *** is an agency for *** and carries out events and Incentives for economic enterprises worldwide. Besides, my activities...