http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetter-Writing/Forum5.htmFormal letter-writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, or invitation letter, CVs, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter.enXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfApology/cqwvb/post.htm#248148Mon, 23 Feb 2009 04:53:14 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:248148Grammar Geek0http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfApology/cqwvb/post.htm#248148http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-248148.xmlGood luck to you. I have also been in situations in which someone is upset with you, and you have absolutely no idea why. Let's hope it was a simple miscommunication, and not some third party who deliberately tried to saboutage the relationship.http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfApology/cqwvb/post.htm#248056Thu, 23 Apr 2009 03:53:14 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:248056Cadela21http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfApology/cqwvb/post.htm#248056http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-248056.xmlThank you so much, I have made the recommended changes.http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfApology/cqwvb/post.htm#248033Sat, 23 May 2009 03:53:14 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:248033Grammar Geek2http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfApology/cqwvb/post.htm#248033http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-248033.xmlI think you are apologizing too many times for something when you don't know what it is. Omit the "We hope that you can forgive us..." sentence. ...by the fact that you appear to be angry with us... he hasn't told you so himself. don't say "destroy" - that implies it's completely over. Otherwise, I think it's a fine letter.http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfApology/cqwvb/post.htmMon, 23 Feb 2009 04:53:14 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:248031Cadela23http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfApology/cqwvb/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-248031.xmlI am trying to write a good letter of apology to a manager of a business. My husband and myself worked for this business as contract labor for 5 years, at least 4 months of the year. We thought we we had a very good relationship with the manager as we had alot of personal conversations. Recently it has been brought to our attenttion by an employee of that business that he is angry with us and we are not welcome on property. We did see him socially a few months ago and he was very cold to us so we know there is a problem. We want to write a letter but we don't know what we did, so it is hard. Here is the letter we came up with, can anyone help us with its content? We really want to resolve this situation so this letter is very important....