ESL, Formal, General & Business Letter Writing (English language)

Re: motivation letter for university (souki)

Anonymous — Sun, 05 Nov 2006 22:32:01 GMT

I think its ok.

final draft

Souki — Thu, 26 Oct 2006 17:42:01 GMT

With this letter I would like to explain my motivation for studying Business Administration in general and why I chose Al Akhawayn University:

Throughout my secondary education, I have been most interested in programs taught in English.

As you can see from the documents I already sent you, I got my Baccalaureate in Experimental Science from Elmanal School in June 2005.

After that, I enrolled at Sunderland University, which is a British university, here in Casablanca,

that offers its programs in English.

I took a foundation year program. During the year, I learned some new subjects related to business such as business English and English for commerce. I also learned some basic skills in IT. Due to the personal development course I acquired a lot of new ideas in different areas.

Now I have completed this, I would like to continue my education at an institution of higher education, to obtain a Bachelor of Business Administration. In particular, I am interested in learning more about the structure and organization of a company, economical processes in general, global economic coherences and communications, new cultures and languages. I also want do develop my methodical abilities and soft skills.

Thereafter I want to use the acquired knowledge to continue in a masters program of business, aiming to be well prepared to enter the business world. My long-term goal is to work for an international company or to start as an independent entrepreneur, bringing in new ideas and an efficient working style gained through my higher education hopefully started at AUI.

Due to the reputation of AUI, I believe that your offered Business Administration program is greatly suitable for me, combining my passion for global communication, social justice, political freedom and my love for organizing and leading projects.

I am confident that with my strong motivation, my personality and with the Business Administration program on top, I will have a solid foundation for a successful and fulfilling career, in which I plan to weld relationships across cultures and ensure that intercultural communication takes place effectively.

I have already sent all required documents for the undergraduate program. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. I look forward to a positive response and to a great time in an outstanding educational program at AUI.

Yours respectfully

Re: plz i need this motivation letter for universitypleaaaase help me (souki)

Souki — Thu, 26 Oct 2006 17:40:34 GMT

thank u a lot

Re: plz i need this motivation letter for universitypleaaaase help me (souki)

nona the brit — Thu, 26 Oct 2006 15:32:12 GMT

Hi,

I wasn't sure about this part from your first letter but it should read

"I took a foundation year program. During the year, I learned some new subjects related to business such as business English and English for commerce. I also learned some basic skills in IT. Due to the personal development course I acquired a lot of new ideas in different areas. I worked really hard to get a good grade.

Now I have completed this, I would like to continue my education at"

Good luck with your application.

Re: plz i need this motivation letter for universitypleaaaase help me (souki)

Souki — Thu, 26 Oct 2006 15:20:55 GMT

is it okay now!!!

With this letter I would like to explain my motivation for studying Business Administration in general and why I chose Al Akhawayn University:

Throughout my secondary education, I have been most interested in programs taught in English.

As you can see from the documents I already sent you, I got my Baccalaureate in Experimental Science from Elmanal School in June 2005.

After that, I enrolled at Sunderland University, which is a British university here in Casablanca, that offers its programs in English.

(I have already finish this course , im not taking this course anymore , is it ok if I say :I am taking?.???)I am taking a foundation year program. During this year, I have learned some new subjects related to business such as business English and English for commerce. I have also learned some basic skills in IT. Due to the personal development course I acquired a lot of new ideas in different areas. I worked really hard to get a good grade.

After completing this, I would like to continue my education at an institution of higher education, to obtain a Bachelor of Business Administration. In particular, I am interested in learning more about the structure and organization of a company, economical processes in general, global economic coherences and communications, new cultures and languages. I also want do develop my methodical abilities and soft skills.

Due to the reputation of AUI, I believe that your offered business administration program is greatly suitable for me, combining my passion for global communication, social justice ,political freedom and my love for organizing and leading projects.

And I canât talk about AUI without thinking of its students of course and their good level after graduating from AUI and their career.(I am gona delete this sentence )

Re: plz i need this motivation letter for universitypleaaaase help me (souki)

nona the brit — Thu, 26 Oct 2006 14:54:06 GMT

With this letter I would like to explain my motivation for studying Business Administration in general and why I chose AL AKHAWAYN UNIVERSITY. (no need to put their name all in capitals).

Throughout my secondary education, I have been most interested in programs taught in English.

As you can see from the document I already sent you, I got my Baccalaureate in Experimental Science from Elmanal School in June 2005.

After that, I enrolled at Sunderland University, which is a British university here in Casablanca, that offers its programs in English . I am taking a foundation year program. During this year, I have learned some new subjects related to business such as business English and English for commerce . I have also learned some basic skills in IT. Due to the personal development course I acquired a lot of new ideas in different areas. I worked really hard to get a good grade.

Due to the reputation of AUI , I believe that your offered business administration program is greatly suitable for me, combining my passion for global communication, social justice, political freedom and my love for organizing and leading projects.

And I canât talk about AUI without thinking of its students of course and their good level after graduating from AUI and their career. re-phrase this sentence.

plz i need this motivation letter for universitypleaaaase help me (souki)

Souki — Wed, 25 Oct 2006 19:44:10 GMT

(edited to remove formatting)

With this letter I would like to explain my motivation for studying Business Administration in general and why I chose AL AKHAWAYN UNIVERSITY:

Throughout my secondary education, I have been most interested in programs taught in english.

As you can see from the required document I sent you before, I get my baccalaureate in experimental science from Elmanal School in June 2005.

After that, I have enrolled for an admission for Sunderland University, here in Casablanca which is a British university, offering its programs in English .I have been accepted to take a foundation year program. During this year, I have learned some new subjects related to business such as business English and English for commerce . I have also learned some basic skills in IT. Due to the personal development course I acquired a lot of new ideas in different areas. I worked really hard to get a good grade.

After completing secondary School, and my foundation year program, I would like to continue my education at an institution of higher education, to obtain a Bachelor of Business Administration. In particular, I am interested in learning more about the structure and organization of a company, economical processes (in general), global economic coherences and communications, new cultures and languages. I also want do develop my methodical abilities and soft skills. (I donât know if it muches whit what they said in this paragraph according to the web site:

âThe Bachelor of Business Administration (BBA) program complements the broad educational objectives reflected in the AUI core curriculum. The purpose of the BBA program is to pre p a re students for positions of leadership in the business, professional and public sectors of a global economy. Additionally, it provides instruction of the highest quality that serves as a model for other universities interested in developing a globally focused business program. AUI maintains a highly qualified faculty that is committed to teaching excellence and keeping abreast of new developments through scholarly research and direct involvement with business and the economic community.

Undergraduate instruction in business is consistent with modern management education principles and serves the objectives of the nation, which include rapid economic growth, social justice, political and economic freedom and international cooperation. The BBA program provides a broad education and general exposure to the complex relationships between government, business and consumers. In upper level studies, students receive a concentrated education in the following specialized areas: finance, management, marketing, and international business.â

Thereafter I want to use the acquired knowledge to continue in a masters program of business, aiming to be well prepared to enter the business world. My long-term goal is to enrich an international operating company or to start as an independent entrepreneur, bringing in new ideas and an efficient working style gained through my higher education hopefully started at AUI.

Due to the AUI reputation, I believe that your offered business administration program is greatly suitable for me, combining my passion for global communication, social justice political freedom and my love for organizing and leading projects.

And I canât talk about AUI without thinking of its students of course and their good level after graduating from AUI and their career.

Re: motivation letter for university (souki)

nona the brit — Wed, 25 Oct 2006 00:01:10 GMT

Post your letter here for some help.

motivation letter for university (souki)

Souki — Tue, 24 Oct 2006 23:58:18 GMT

i need your help ; i dont know if i gonna convince them by this letter or not plz , i need yhis letter before thursday.plz