ESL, Formal, General & Business Letter Writing (English language)

Re: Check this cover letter plz

Anonymous — Tue, 07 Nov 2006 20:07:04 GMT

Here are some suggested corrections:

Sir/Madam,

I am interested in employment with your organization. Please find my resume enclosed. It details my education and skills. References and any other information, if needed, will be promptly provided.

I am keen to develop my career as a Software Engineer. I hope to work for an organization where I would be a valuable team member, contributing quality ideas and work in a place where there is ample scope for individual as well as company growth in Software Design and Development. My work ethic is founded on a 'whatever it takes' attitude and diligent persistence to ensure all projects are completely fulfilled.

I look forward to discussing how my knowledge and experience may be beneficial to your organization.

Sincerely,
SSSS.

Check this cover letter plz

Waterworld — Mon, 06 Nov 2006 05:42:36 GMT

To
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Sir/Madam,
I am interested in exploring the possibility of seeking employment with your organization. Please find my resume enclosed, it will furnish you with the details relevant to my education and skills. References and any other information you require shall be promptly provided upon your request.
To develop my career as a Software Engineer where I will be a valuable team member, contributing quality ideas and work for an organization where there is an ample scope for individual as well as organization growth in Software Design and Development. My work ethic is founded on a 'what-ever-it-takes' attitude and diligent persistence to ensure all projects are completely fulfilled to the utmost.
I look forward to discussing how my knowledge and experience may be beneficial to your organization.

Sincerely,
SSSS.