Re: Hello will someone helps me with my English for my covering letter thanks!!

Widget — Fri, 10 Nov 2006 03:34:21 GMT

I am delighted to see your job posting on {advertisement} for the above position, and would like to learn more about this opportunity.

I recently graduated from the University of ***** with a successful academic record, having attained 2 scientific based degrees. Throughout my time at university, I acquired extensive scientific knowledge through specific in-depth investigations, practical laboratory experience and analytical recording. I have developed strong communication and scientific organisational skills through both my degress, and gained administration experience in a global bank. Working as a Finance Customer Service Administrator within a profitable global bank has broadened my organisational skills, sense of professionalism and observation. For these reasons I believe I would be useful to your company as a Laboratory Analyst.

Throughout my degree, I have been able to develop my expertise in the scientific field, particularly in pharmaceutical analysis; consequently, I pursued this in a successful dissertation[do you mean 'thesis'?]. This involved a considerable amount of research and laboratory work, including the use of HPLC. I also gained experience in GC, AA Spectrophotometry and I am proficient in several scientific databases, as my postgraduate course required the use of {examples}. My IT skills are another asset; I have used technology extensively in both work and study. Working at the bank has been valuable in teaching me the importance of ascertaining customer's needs, and providing clear and accurate information. My responsibilities highlighted the importance of team work and enabled me to gain experience in working under pressure to meet deadlines within a professional environment.

My CV is enclosed for your consideration. I look forward hearing from you.

Hello will someone helps me with my English for my covering letter thanks!!

Anonymous — Wed, 08 Nov 2006 10:27:50 GMT

I am delighted to see your job posting on {advertisement} for above position, and would like to learn more about this opportunity.

I am a recent graduate University of ***** with a successful academic, having attaine 2 scientific based degrees. Throughout my time at university, I acquired extensive scientifc knowledge, specific in depth investigations and practical laboratory experience. and analytical record. I have developed strong communication and scientific organisation skills through both my degress and gained admintsration in a global bank. Working as a Finance Customer Service Adminisrator within a lucrative global bank has broadned my organisatonal skills, sense of professionalism and observation. For these reasons I beleive I would be advantegeous with your company as Laboratory Analyst.

Throughtout my degree, I have been able to develop my expertise in the scientific field, particularly, in pharmaceutical analysis, consequently, I pursued this in a successful dissertation. This involved a considerable amount of reserach and laboratory work including the use of HPLC. I also gained experience in GC, AA Spectrophotometry and I am proficient in several scientific databases as my postgraduate course required the use of {examples}. My IT skills are another assett in both university and employment I have used technology extensively. Working at bank is valuable in teaching me the importance of ascertaining customer's needs, providing clear and accurate information. My responbilities highlighted the significiant of team work and gave me experience of working under pressure in meeting deadlines within a professional environment.

My CV is enclosed for your consideration. I shall look forward hearing from you soon.

ESL, Formal, General & Business Letter Writing (English language)

Re: Hello will someone helps me with my English for my covering letter thanks!!

Hello will someone helps me with my English for my covering letter thanks!!