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Re: help me check this cover letter pls..

Widget — Sun, 12 Nov 2006 23:43:56 GMT

Subject: Application for the Post of Financial Reporting Assistant

I would like to apply for the post of Financial Reporting Assistant as advertised in your Singapore website on October 26, 2006.

Currently in ***, where I am now attaining my *** (specializing in Banking, Finance and Investment), I have been put through an independent learning method â Problem Based Learning. Problem Based Learning encourages students to be more analytical and thus view problems from a much broader perspective.

In your advertisement, you also stated that you required someone that can multi-task and work in a fast paced environment. My education in *** would definitely enable me to do so. Due to the shorter term for ***, I had to handle 3-4 projects per semester. With the completion date for each project being relatively close to each other, I learned to be able to multi-task and withstand working in a pressurized environment.

Being a team player is crucial for a Financial Reporting Assistant. I am proud to say that for the past few years, I have been able to coordinate well with other team members on my various projects and achieve good results for each project. My years with *** have also equipped me with more technological skills. I am able to work well with Microsoft Access and Microsoft Excel.

I believe that the above-mentioned qualities will enable me to perform well as a Financial Planning Assistant and contribute to HSBC. I have attached my resume together with this cover letter. I hope that you will consider me for this position. I am *** and you can contact me at the following number: (M) *** (H) ***. Email: ***

help me check this cover letter pls..

Anonymous — Sat, 11 Nov 2006 14:37:00 GMT

Dear Sir/Madam,

Subject: Application for the Post of Financial Reporting Assistant

I am writing in to apply for the post of Financial Reporting Assistant as advertised in your Singapore website on October 26, 2006.

Currently in ***, where I am now attaining my *** (specialize in Banking, Finance and Investment), I been put through an independent learning method â Problem Based Learning. Through Problem Based Learning, it had stimulated me to be more analytical and thus view problem in a much greater aspect.

In your advertisement, you also stated that you required someone that can multi-tasked and work in a fast paced environment. My education in *** would definitely enable me to do so. With the shorter term for ***, I had to handle 3-4 projects per semester. With the dateline for each project being relatively closed to each other, it had trained me to be able to multi-task and withstand working in a pressurize environment.

Being a team player is a crucial for a Financial Reporting Assistant. I am proud to say that for the past years, I am able to coordinate well with my various projects team members and achieve good results for each of the project. My years with *** had also equipped me with more technological skills. I am able to work well with Microsoft Access and Microsoft Excel.

I believed with the above mentioned qualities, I am able to perform well as a Financial Planning Assistant and contribute to HSBC. I have attached my resume together with this cover letter. I hope that you would kindly take me into consideration. I am *** and you can contact me at the following number: (M) *** (H) ***. Email: ***

Thank you!

Yours Sincerely,

***