Friends need some advice on my Motivation letter

Santarock — Fri, 01 Dec 2006 11:12:23 GMT

Hello Friends I have written a motivation letter for admission to an post graduate couse in management and i have already dome my masters in engineering please let me know about the mistakes i have made

i will be eagerly waiting for your valuable comments and sugesstions

Motivation Letter

Firstly I would like to introduce myself as an Indian student having completed my Bachelor of Engineering in the field of Civil Engineering from University of Pune, India and have worked in the interdisciplinary field for around 3 years. Currently I am pursuing my `Masterâs in Rehabilitation EngineeringÂ´ at the Dresden University of Technology, Germany.

To further my career aspirations of becoming part of a logistics management team, I want to obtain a Post graduate Degree in Logistics Management systems. Having this knowledge will allow me to better understand management principles, and contribute in the transfer of knowledge and modern management theories in my home country.

No education is complete without experience. Armed with a solid understanding of academic principles, I can begin my career where I will add to my experience. Because I will be well versed in the theory, I will be able to adapt and modify the theoretical constructs as required in order to meet future needs. I fully recognize that our political, economic, and technological environments are constantly changing, and thus management needs to be able to adapt quickly and accurately to the new conditions if the company is to survive, let alone prosper. I believe obtaining a Post graduate Degree will provide me the necessary background to anticipate and react to the ever-changing environments. I hope this course is a useful addition to my current education, which I can use for my later professional career.

It would be great opportunity for me to pursue my post graduation from Stan Ackermans Institute which is one of the premiere institutes in Netherlands and it is also affiliated together with the three main Dutch universities of technology. In addition to broadening my technological expertise, I will also be learning more professional skills that will enhance my career opportunities.

Being an optimistic and creative team player with very good presentation skills and a wide range of interests, I am also able to work self-contained. Not only personal strengths in analytical thinking, problem solving and identifying the determining factors of success, but also very good communication skills and a high familiarity with the English language make me feel being the right person for this course.

Of an exceptional motivation, I strongly imply myself in my academic and professional activities to carry out my objectives. My international experiences attest of my capacity of integration and adaptation. Opened to others, speaking two foreign languages in addition to my Indian mother tongue (English, German). I had the pleasure to meet varied cultures and to affirm my intrapersonal ease.

The ambitions which I have just exposed to you would not be realized without a solid theoretical background and a strong real world experience specialized in the management. I am deeply convinced with that the Stan Ackermans Institute offers is the best way of realizing this future because of its international orientation. A completion of this Post Graduate Degree in your Institute will be an excellent springboard for my future career and will provide me the knowledge, confidence, and contacts to realize my dreams. Furthermore, the courses this program combines match perfectly my professional and academic expectations.

I would like to reiterate that I possess the background, the ability and the motivation to make a significant contribution to Logistics Management. I hope you will take a favorable decision regarding my admission to this program and I am looking forward to join the Stan Ackermans Institute and launch my new career.

Waiting for your positive response,

Sincerely,
Sachin Degaonkar

ESL, Formal, General & Business Letter Writing (English language)

Friends need some advice on my Motivation letter