ESL, Formal, General & Business Letter Writing (English language)

Re: cv , i need your advise , should i add something???plzzzzzzzzzzzz

Souki — Sun, 10 Dec 2006 01:19:12 GMT

thanks

Re: cv , i need your advise , should i add something???plzzzzzzzzzzzz

nona the brit — Thu, 07 Dec 2006 17:54:19 GMT

Ah that makes more sense - your date of birth is incorrect on the original.

I would still flesh it out a bit as suggested.

Re: cv , i need your advise , should i add something???plzzzzzzzzzzzz

Souki — Thu, 07 Dec 2006 17:33:39 GMT

hello , well actually , i get my high school diploma when i was 18 , i was born on the 1st january 1988 , and this cv is not for applying for job , but i need it for an application to a business school in paris.thank u

Re: cv , i need your advise , should i add something???plzzzzzzzzzzzz

nona the brit — Tue, 05 Dec 2006 15:58:12 GMT

That's an understatement. Very thin.

Your objective is too vague. what sort of industry do you want to work in - what sort of career goals do you have? Just 'a job in an English company' doesn't exactly tell anyone anything, does it. Valuable knowledge of what? what type of environment?

Are you sure you didn't get your high school diploma until you were 23 years old? If that really is the case then you probably need to include some explanation on what you were doing from the age of 18, normal graduation age. That's the first thing I would think as a recruiter - how come a 24 year old has no work experience, has only just acquired their high school diploma, and has done one year of a degree?
Also, why are you leaving your degree course?

Do you have any work experience? Do you have any experience relevant to work from your studies (i.e. led a team, researched something, took responsibility etc).

What computer skills do you have exactly 'most software' is not detailed enough. List the programmes you are competent in.

A brief personal statement is a good idea too.

Don't forget that when you apply for a job that person may have several hundred applictions in front of them. They will then narrow this down to a short-list of maybe only 6 people to interview. Your CV has to jump out at them and make you sound better than all the others. At the moment it says nothing about why anyone should employ you. You are 24 but this reads as though you have no experience in the adult world of work or studies.

Re: cv , i need your advise , should i add something???plzzzzzzzzzzzz

Feebs11 — Tue, 05 Dec 2006 02:39:26 GMT

Souki wrote:
address ***

***

e-mail address:  ***@hotmail.com

Phone number :00000000000

PRESENTATION:

Last name: aaaaaaaaaaaaa

First name:llllllllllllllllllllllllll

Date of birth: January 1st 1982

Nationality: ***

PROFESSIONAL OBJECTIVE

Seeking a position in an English Speaking Organization requiring creativity and to gain valuable knowledge from onsite experience

EDUCATION

High School Diploma in Experimental Science, Ecoles ffffffffff,

            city, country, June 2005

Foundation year, University of HHHHHHH, city, country, September 2006

Specialized Courses: Personal Development, Business English, English for Commerce, Writing Skills, and Quantitative methods.

ADDITIONAL BACKGROUND

Ã¼      Fluent in Arabic, French and English

Ã¼      Some Spanish

Ã¼      Possess great computer skills, as I am familiar with most computer softwares

Ã¼      I am a very creative person, outspoken, sociable, energetic, organized and always ready to learn more.

It's a bit thin on your experience and what you can offer to a potential employer.

cv , i need your advise , should i add something???plzzzzzzzzzzzz

Souki — Tue, 05 Dec 2006 02:14:42 GMT

adress ***

***

e-mail adresse: ***@hotmail.com

Phone number :00000000000

PRESENTATION:

Last name: aaaaaaaaaaaaa

First name:llllllllllllllllllllllllll

Date of birth: January 01^rd 1982

Nationality: ***

PROFESSIONAL OBJECTIVE

Seeking a position in an English Speaking Organization requiring creativity and to gain valuable knowledge from onsite experience

EDUCATION

High School Diploma in Experimental Science, Ecoles ffffffffff,

city, country, June 2005

Foundation year, University of HHHHHHH, city, country, September 2006

Specialized Courses: Personal Development, Business English, English for Commerce, Writing Skills, and Quantitative methods.

ADDITIONAL BACKGROUND

Ã¼ Fluent in Arabic, French and English

Ã¼ Some Spanish

Ã¼ Possesses great computer skills, as I am familiar with most computer softwares

Ã¼ I am a very creative person, outspoken, sociable, energetic, organized and always ready to learn more.