http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetter-Writing/Forum5.htmFormal letter-writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, or invitation letter, CVs, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMotivationalLetter/vrrpr/post.htm#334501Thu, 26 Feb 2009 10:03:44 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:334501nona the brit0http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMotivationalLetter/vrrpr/post.htm#334501http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-334501.xmlHi, a few amendments made in bold and you should take another look at the highlighted parts. Otherwise, good letter! I am writing to you to apply for the Bachelor of International Economics and Management program. My name is X and I am currently studying economics at the University of X . Since I am constantly seeking after gaining experience abroad and learning new languages, the wish arouse to continue my studies in Italy. Bocconi´s long and prestigious tradition , along with its outstanding international environment , is why I made Bocconi my school of choice. My main fields of interest are many-sided . Throughout my trainee program in a PR agency I was keen on managerial functions. I tremendously enjoyed my experience because...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMotivationalLetter/vrrpr/post.htmMon, 26 Jan 2009 10:03:44 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:334339Tatjana 02091http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMotivationalLetter/vrrpr/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-334339.xmlhello fiends! im applying for a study program and just finished my motivational letter. I am very thankful for corrections of any kind and comments, since i actually have no clue how a perfect moti letter looks like...;-) Thank you!!! Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to apply for the Bachelor of International Economics and Management program. My name is X and I am currently studying economics at the University of X . Since I am constantly seeking after gaining experience abroad and learning new languages, the wish arouse to continue my studies in Italy. Bocconi´s long and prestigious tradition along with its outstanding international environment is why I made Bocconi my school of choice. My main fields of...