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Re: Can someone check my personal data resume?

Anonymous — Thu, 10 Apr 2008 09:57:49 GMT

Dear,

My client in Aachen is looking for a Sales Girl who needs to work in an international Software Product Selling so German and English language is a must

If you are interested or if you know any one please kindly let me know so that I can explain you more about this job

Best Regards

Amar

0044 20 8090 2178

Re: Can someone check my personal data resume?

Kawthar — Thu, 08 Mar 2007 16:00:17 GMT

Most Welcome dear

Re: Can someone check my personal data resume?

Irizzie — Thu, 08 Mar 2007 13:41:10 GMT

Hi!

Thank you very much!

Regards, Iris

Re: Can someone check my personal data resume?

Kawthar — Thu, 08 Mar 2007 09:36:18 GMT

Hello Iris !

first of all.. contact information should be mentioned at the end.. second, the resume should be more clear and tidy.. Please see the changes which I made.. Wish it will meet your satisfaction...

Maryam

C.V.

Personal Information:

Name: *********

Date of Birth: May 20, 1983
Nationality: Dutch

Place of Birth: Vlissingen
Citizenship: The Netherlands
Gender: Female

Marital Status: Single
Contact information

Education:

2003-2006

Univesity : Hogeschool Zeeland University, Vlissingen, The Netherlands

Certificate: Bachelor in science of International Business and Languages

Language Subjects : Dutch, German, English and Spanish.

Major Subjects : marketing, Human Resource Management, Strategic management, Leisure management, general economy, business economics, law, statistics, export management and mini venture.

~~Diploma obtained in 2006.~~ No need to mention this information again, you already mentioned the year above.

1999-2003

University : ROC Zeeland, Middelburg,The Netherlands

Study : Middle tourist and recreational education,

Language Subjects: communication, German, English and French.

Major Subjects : travel - and tourist information, touroperating, administration and management, operational management travel, basic management and travel accompaniment.

~~Diploma obtained in 2003.~~

1995-1999

University: CSW MAVO, Middelburg, The Netherlands

Study :Lower General Secondary Education

Language Subjects: Dutch, German, English and French.

Major Subjects : mathematics, geography, history.

~~Diploma obtained in 1999.~~

Additional activities

2005-2006 Editor of the IBL newsletter

Activities: during my study International Business and Languages I have been responsible for the monthly distributing of the IBL - newsletter. Among other things, this magazine consisted of important information about the IBL-Study, interviews with old International Business and Languages students, interviews with teachers and possible careers. ~~for International Business and Languages students.~~

Employment history:

(Work experience)

2007

Work Place : Hotel de Dikke van Dale, Sluis.

Position : Sales Executive.

Activities : Realising the turnover targets by contacting, presenting and selling hotelproducts to new and/or existing accounts. Making acquisition - and sale conversations, persuading (potential) relations of the advantages of co-operation and take care for the acceptance of quotations.

(Practical experience)

2006

Work Place: Alginco N.V.,Paramaribo, Surinam

Activities : Besides performing my main study, a study about customer satisfaction, I have made several marketing analyses for the company. Furthermore I have worked at ~~the department marketing~~ marketing department, ~~there~~ I was responsible for looking after the sales presentations, maintaining contacts with constituents, ~~the~~ drawing up of quotations and keeping up the stock supply.

2002

1- Work Place: Hotel Arion, Vlisingen

Activities : The checking in and ~~the~~ checking out of guests, answering and processing of reservations, complaint treatment and administrative activities.

~~2002~~ No need to mention the year again.

2-Work Place: Cosmo Entertainment, Mallorca, Spain

Activities : The daily execution of the hotel entertainment. Presenting and giving theatre shows, accompanying sport - and game programmes and accompanying child entertainment.

2000

Work Place: Campsite de witte raaf, Arnemuiden

Activities : Answering and processing of reservations, maintaining the contacts by e-mail, the processing of technical troubles and complaints.

(Additional jobs)

2005-2006

Work Place: Holidaypark Port ZÃ©lande, Ouddorp

Activities : cleaning holiday bungalows

2003-2004 Help on the weekends, Miss Etam, Middelburg

Activities: helping customers, cashier work, activities in the storehouse and keeping the store orderly.

2003 Help for the summer, Livera, Middelburg

Activities: helping customers, cashier work, activities in the storehouse and keeping the store orderly.

2002 Help on the weekends, Dolcis, Middelburg

Activities: helping customers, cashier work, activities in the storehouse and keeping the store orderly.

Special skills:

Computer skills : Word, Excel, PowerPoint and Internet.

Courses : Cambridge enterprise examination, SPIN- sales method

Drivers license : B â Car

Languages:

Language Reading Writing Speaking

Dutch Mother Tongue Mother Tongue Mother Tongue

English Good Good Good

German Good Fair Good

Spanish Basics Basics Basics

French Basics Basics Basics

Interests:

Fashion, travel and dance.

Contact Information:

Adress : ********

Telephone No. : ********

Mobile No. : ********

E-mail : ********

That's all dear.. hope you'll like it !

Au revoir !!

Can someone check my personal data resume?

Irizzie — Tue, 06 Mar 2007 17:51:31 GMT

Hi!

Can someone check my personal data resume?

Thanks, Iris

Contact information

Name : (personal information removed by moderator. It is not wise to post this on a public forum).

Personal information

Date of Birth                :             May 20, 1983
Place of Birth             :             Vlissingen
Citizenship                  :             The Netherlands
Sex                              :             Female

Marital Status : Single
Nationality : Dutch

Employment history

Work experience

2007 Sales Executive,Hotel de Dikke van Dale, Sluis

Activities: realising the turnover targets by contacting, presenting and selling hotelproducts to new and/or existing accounts. Making acquisition - and sale conversations, persuading (potential) relations of the advantages of co-operation and take care for the acceptance of quotations.

Practical experience

2006 Alginco N.V.,Paramaribo, Surinam

Activities: besides performing my main study, a study about customer satisfaction, I have made several marketing analyses for the company. Furthermore I have worked at the department marketing, there I was responsible for looking after the sales presentations, maintaining contacts with constituents, the drawing up of quotations and keeping up the stock supply.

2002 Hotel Arion, Vlisingen

Activities: the checking in and the checking out of guests, answering and processing of reservations, complaint treatment and administrative activities.

2002 Cosmo Entertainment, Mallorca, Spain

Activities: the daily execution of the hotelentertainment. Presenting and giving theatre shows, accompanying sport - and game programmes and accompanying child entertainment.

2000 Campsite de witte raaf, Arnemuiden

Activities: Answering and processing of reservations, maintaining the contacts by e-mail, the processing of technical troubles and complaints.

Additional jobs

Activities: cleaning holiday bungalows

2003-2004 Help on the weekends, Miss Etam, Middelburg

Activities: helping customers, cashier work, activities in the storehouse and keeping the store orderly.

2003 Help for the summer, Livera, Middelburg

Activities: helping customers, cashier work, activities in the storehouse and keeping the store orderly.

2002 Help on the weekends, Dolcis, Middelburg

Activities: helping customers, cashier work, activities in the storehouse and keeping the store orderly.

Educations

2003-2006 Hogeschool Zeeland University, Vlissingen, The Netherlands

Bachelor in science of International Business and Languages

Subjects: Dutch, German, English, Spanish, marketing, Human Resource Management, Strategic management, Leisure management, general economy, business economics, law, statistics, export management,

mini venture.

Diploma obtained in 2006.

1999-2003 ROC Zeeland, Middelburg,The Netherlands

Middle tourist and recreational education,

Subjects: communication, German, English, French, travel - and tourist information, touroperating, administration and management, operational management travel, basic management, travel accompaniment.

Diploma obtained in 2003.

1995-1999 CSW MAVO, Middelburg, The Netherlands

Lower General Secondary Education

Subjects: Dutch, German, English, French, mathematics, geography, history.

Diploma obtained in 1999.

Additional activities

2005-2006 Editor of the IBL newsletter

Activities: during my study International Business and Languages I have been responsible for the monthly distributing of the IBL - newsletter. Among other things, this magazine consisted of important information about the IBL-Study, interviews with old International Business and Languages students, interviews with teachers and possible careers for International Business and Languages students.

Special skills

Computer skills : Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Internet.

Drivers license : B â Car

Courses : Cambridge enterprise examination, SPIN- sales method

Languages

Writing Speaking Reading

Dutch Mother Tongue Mother Tongue Mother Tongue

English Good Good Good

German Fair Good Good

Spanish Basics Basics Basics

French Basics Basics Basics

Interests

Fashion, travel, dance.

Language	Reading	Writing	Speaking
Dutch	Mother Tongue	Mother Tongue	Mother Tongue
English	Good	Good	Good
German	Good	Fair	Good
Spanish	Basics	Basics	Basics
French	Basics	Basics	Basics