Re: could you please check my letter. Thank you very much

Doll — Mon, 30 Apr 2007 20:11:33 GMT

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for your letter dated 20^th April 2007. I am delighted to hear from you.

As you can see what has been stated in my application form ~~in 2003~~, I finished â¦â¦ High School in â¦....., the United States, with the GPA of 4.14 (outstanding) in 2003. From 2004 to 2007, I am have been doing a Bachelor of Science degree at â¦College in â¦â¦â¦â¦ where English is the language of instruction. With my experiences of studying and living in places where English has been the language of communication and instruction, I believe I should be exempted from English Tests like IELTS or TOEFL. I would be grateful if you could reconsider my application one more time.

Enclosed(Enclosed what?) you will find a letter from my school Director ~~which~~ who ( I hope you mean a person) will clearly confirm what has been mentioned above. A copy of my transcript will show my final grades in my BSc Year. I got a GPA of 5.85 (A+) over 6 ~~for~~ in the 1^st semester and 5.75(A+) ~~for~~ in the 2^nd semester. I spoke with our academic Dean, Dr. â¦â¦â¦., and she let me know that if my results from a 6-month- training period (from April to October 2007) is good together with my excellent academic results and I will be awarded for the second time to have the Scholarship for Best â Student â Of â Year at .......in October 2007. I carried off this prize last year in October 2006.

Could you possibly let me know via email if my application is has been accepted? As soon as I can get my unconditional offer letter,then I will ~~then~~ continue to apply for scholarships offered byâ¦â¦.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to hearing good news from you.

Yours faithfully,

could you please check my letter. Thank you very much

Meobeo — Sat, 28 Apr 2007 19:08:59 GMT

Saturday, April 28, 2007

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for your letter dated 20^th April 2007. I am delighted to hear from you.

As what has been stated in my application form. In 2003, I finished â¦â¦ High School in â¦....., the United States, with the GPA of 4.14 (outstanding). From 2004 to 2007, I am doing a Bachelor of Science degree at â¦College in â¦â¦â¦â¦ where English is the language of instruction. With my experiences of studying and living in places where English has been the language of communication and instruction, I believe I should be exempted from English Tests like IELTS or TOEFL. I would be grateful if you could reconsider my application one more time.

Enclosed you will find a letter from my school Director which will clearly confirm what has been mentioned above. A copy of my transcript will show my final grades in my BSc Year. I got a GPA of 5.85 (A+) over 6 for the 1^st semester and 5.75(A+) for the 2^nd semester. I spoke with our academic Dean, Dr. â¦â¦â¦., and she let me know that, if my result from a 6-month training period (from April to October 2007) is good, together with my excellent academic result, I will be awarded for the second time, the Scholarship for Best â Student â Of â Year at .......in October 2007. I carried off this prize last year in October 2006.

Could you possibly let me know via email if my application is accepted? As soon as I can get my unconditional offer letter, I will then continue to apply for scholarships offered byâ¦â¦.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing good news from you.

Yours faithfully,

ESL, Formal, General & Business Letter Writing (English language)

Re: could you please check my letter. Thank you very much

could you please check my letter. Thank you very much