PLEASE, could you check my motivation letter, thank you

Anonymous — Sun, 06 May 2007 01:09:08 GMT

please

Hello everybody! I seriously need some help for correcting my motivation letter. I have never done one before, so if you have any comments or you find any mistakes PLEASE let me know. I would definitely appreciate that!

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My name is Alejandro Lopez and I am a 22 years old, highly motivated student at the University of Valencia, Spain. Currently, IÂ´m in my last year of a five year barchelorâs degree in Physics.

This year I am in Barcelona at Universidad AutÃ³noma of Barcelona with a spanish exchange program ( SICUE -SENECA) and in June i will be taking my final exams in Cosmology, standard model, relativiy , quantum computation and matter-light interaction.

I have always thought that theory is the basis of everything, but at the same time I am convinced that experience is what makes a person unique. I think that summer program can definitely provide a rare oportunity for gaining the valuable âhands- on experienceâ that I am looking for.

I am convinced that the experience of joining in a reserach group will be very helpful for me to further develop myself and to improve my knowledge. I am confident that the courses that i have taken will make me a good candidate for this intership.

I also would like to know more about German culture and society. Germany has a rich cultural and spiritual heritance i would like to live. I also would like to learn another language and experience another educational system.

Because of I have studied English over many years i think the languaje will not be a problem. I am a good learner and have fluent English; two years ago I successfully passed the FCE Cambridge and TOEFL Examination . In order to become much better, last year I had the chance to attend University of Texas in Austin with an internationAL exchange program. . I found that I was able to learn better residing in the country and I greatly appreciated the cultural experience because it gave me a unique motivation for further improvement in language.

My personal intention is to make a Master and then a PhD and follow an academic career as a university teacher. I think Germany is the ideal place to study more and gain as much knowledge, experience I can. I hope this intership in a join researchr program there will help me come closer to my target and provide me with all the necessary in order to fulfill my dreams.

I am enclosing my curriculum vitae, academic scores files and certificates of English ( FCE and TOELF).

Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. I look forward to a positive response.

ESL, Formal, General & Business Letter Writing (English language)

PLEASE, could you check my motivation letter, thank you