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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>ESL, Formal, General &amp; Business Letter Writing (English language)</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetterWriting-EnglishLanguage/Forum5.htm</link><description>Formal Letter writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, invitation, CV, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter in the English language.</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3248.36859)</generator><item><title>Re: Grammer correction -- Resume</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammerCorrectionResume/vqhvn/post.htm#414796</link><pubDate>Wed, 05 Sep 2007 23:41:02 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:414796</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammerCorrectionResume/vqhvn/post.htm#414796</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-414796.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>&lt;P&gt;Hi,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;&amp;nbsp;I believe the current work should be in the present tense and my past work should be past tense. &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;Yes.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;Let me offer a couple of general comments. You have much too much detail for each of your jobs. No-one wants too read all this. Reduce the number of points. Focus on&amp;nbsp;your main responsibilities. and successes&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;You might wish to move some points to a new SKILLS Section, that you can put ahead of the WORK EXPERIENCE section.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;I recooommend that you rewtite/eorganize, before looking at the grammar.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;Best wishes, Clive&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;WORK &lt;/FONT&gt;EXPERIENCE&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;B&gt;&lt;U&gt;Pearson Scott Foresman, Inc. &lt;/U&gt;&lt;U&gt;&amp;nbsp;â Glenview, IL,&amp;nbsp; 03/07 â&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;Present&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/U&gt;&lt;/B&gt;&lt;/P&gt;&lt;div style="clear:both;"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Grammer correction -- Resume</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammerCorrectionResume/vqhdr/post.htm</link><pubDate>Wed, 05 Sep 2007 22:22:54 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:414766</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammerCorrectionResume/vqhdr/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-414766.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi all, please help me to correct grammer within my resume. I believe the current work should be in the present tense and my past work should be past tense.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;

&lt;p class="MsoHeading9"&gt;&lt;b&gt;WORK EXPERIENCE&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;u&gt;Pearson Scott Foresman, Inc. &lt;/u&gt;&lt;u&gt;&amp;nbsp;â Glenview,
 IL,&amp;nbsp; 03/07 â 08/07&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Web
Developer â Educational Technology &lt;/b&gt;&lt;b&gt;Department&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;- A Web Developer in ensuring that all creative requirements
Pearson Scott Foresman electronic books are met via CD-Rom.- &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Manage all levels of electronic book web projects under
consideration for the Design team.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;-&amp;nbsp;
Responsible for page layout, graphic design, audio, creation and
production of graphic web designs for the Educational Technology team.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Apply all browsers test and debug on a daily basis within
Internet Explorer and FireFox for PC and MAC on all electronic books from Grade
Kindergarten and Grade 1 â Grade 5.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Report all web browser issues to Lead Programmer.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Work closely with Software Engineers to ensure the development
of landing pages are met for the projects.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Oversees the creation of conceptual and final designs for higher
level graphic contents.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Ensure the creation and develops advanced Flash contents, tutorials
and multimedia projects are met with Project Manager.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Keep current with competition and new design elements aim at
enhancing the user experience.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Understanding the color concepts for best Usability Interface
and the look and feel of each product. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Establish web site navigation for best result of User Interface.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- 
Ensure that the timely completion of assignments according to
production deadlines, and tracks status during all phases of the project.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Manage handling and resolution of daily web site user issues
escalate by Pearson Scott Foresman Customer.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Research via books and net for new web technology methods for better
web contents and resolutions.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Manage all electronic books insuring that all files for each
book will fit within the CD-Rom.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Ensure all graphical images are optimize for saving storage
spaces and faster page loading time within all browsers.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Gather intelligence pertaining to competitor products and strategies.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- 
After understanding the business flow, able to assess the
problems and bring resolution and methodology to the situation.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Self motivated, fast learner and creative individual.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;-&amp;nbsp; 
Proven ability in working individually or in a team, working
under pressure, problem solving and procurement.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Strong attention to detail.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Able to do multi-task and work independently as well as team
player.&lt;/p&gt;

&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; - Excellent ability written and verbal communication skills.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;u&gt;Network Vista, Inc.&amp;nbsp; â Haslett, MI,
10/01 â 01/07&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Manager
â Internet Technology (IT) &lt;/b&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;nbsp;Department&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- A Webmaster in ensured all creative requirements NetworkVista web
site are met.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Managed all levels of web projects under consideration for the
Design team.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- 
Responsible for leading the development, design, creation and
production of graphic WEB designs for the e-Commerce marketing team.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Managed the Design team in designing, developing, creating, and
producing graphic web designs for Internet Marketing projects (page layouts,
logos, banners, graphic arts, letter heads, business cards, and brochures).&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- 
Lead and oversaw the work of the Senior Designer, Designer and
Junior Designer.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Ensured the development of landing pages, email and promotional
element templates.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Oversaw the creation of conceptual and final designs for higher
level marketing initiatives, including print materials.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- 
Ensured the creation and develops advanced Flash promotional
elements, tutorials and multimedia projects.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Lead the design direction for all customized or unique
NetworkVista.com and Marketing campaigns.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Kept current with competition and new design elements aimed at
enhancing the user experience.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Ensured that the timely completion of assignments according to
production deadlines, and tracks status during all phases of the project.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Managed handling and resolution of daily web site user issues
escalated by NetworkVista Customer Center (NCC).&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Researched and developed target customer and lists for sales
marketing.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Created an improved method of managing bi-annual graphic/web
projects; this increased our business â and subsequent sales revenues within
this area by 25%.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Gathered intelligence pertaining to competitor products and
strategies.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- After understanding the business flow, able to assess the
problems and bring resolution and methodology to the situation.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- 
Self motivated, fast learner and creative individual.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Proven ability in working individually or in a team, working
under pressure, problem solving and procurement.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Established web site navigation for best result of User
Interface.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Making sure that the Web Server hardware and Software is running
properly.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Able to install new software tools for web/graphic design
processes.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- 
Conducted training, review progress, developed and implement
specific processes for successful transition of new employees in effectively
performing their responsibilities.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Strong attention to detail.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Able to do multi-task and work independently as well as team
player.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;- Excellent ability written and verbal communication skills.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;p&gt;Thanks!&lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

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