http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetterWriting-EnglishLanguage/Forum5.htmFormal Letter writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, invitation, CV, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter in the English language.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/zwwrm/post.htm#459233Tue, 01 Jan 2008 19:33:31 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:459233Verade0http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/zwwrm/post.htm#459233http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-459233.xmlDear Anonymous, <br /> <br />This is a long job but if I begin with the first paragraph perhaps someone else will help with the others. <br /> <br />"I am applying to [this school] to enter the program for a Master's degree in [Physical activity? Use the actual title the school uses.]. I am a [professional] with three and a half years of experience. As a student, because I saw the suffering of one of my friends, I developed a great interest in [profession]. During an internship in [where, for whom, for how long?] I treated disabled children [a particular type of disability?]; I found this intensified my interest greatly. <br /> <br />Anonymous, I have to leave the forum. I hope someone else will reply also. Happy New Year!http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/zwhwz/post.htmTue, 01 Jan 2008 07:55:47 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:459073Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/zwhwz/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-459073.xml<P>I am applying for the master course in physical activity. For that I have written a motivation letter. I would be greatful if any one go through the letter and correct any grammer and spelling mistakes and give sugessions for further modification.</P> <P>Dear Sir/Madam,</P> <P>&nbsp;</P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; I am writing to you to apply for the Master of&nbsp; Physical activity. I am a&nbsp;----------- with three and half years of experience. I am having great interest in treating disabled patients from my studentship. One of my friends in schooldays was a handicapped person. By seeing his sufferings, I thought to do something for the disabled people which motivated me to select the&nbsp;--------- profession.&nbsp; During my internship I was posted in&nbsp;-------- (NGO aided by Canada), where I treated many disabled and Special children which further intensified my desire of making disabled to differently abled children.</P> <P>&nbsp;</P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Since I passed out the course as a best outgoing student, I was given an opportunity to work as a&nbsp;----------- in my mother institution (-------- Hospital and College of -----------). In my profession I have treated and treating many neurologically affected patients (spinal cord injury, stroke) and disabled patients. When I treat disabled patients I always try to make them as independent as possible and modify the activities to lead a better life. So I encourage them to take part in social, recreational and physical activities. As the facility is less in our area, it was difficult for me to make them take part in physical and sports activities. My voluntary service for&nbsp;------- scheme (central Govt. Project) to findout disabled children from village schools and various free medical camps with medical specialists grow my interest in rehabilitation of disabled patients. From these experiences I come to know that most of the&nbsp;------- services in our country are aimed to improve the independence of patient only in Activities of Daily Living. For the rehabilitation to be complete it should make the patient to participate in physical, social and recreational activities. As I am having very little knowledge in this area, I wish to learn a master course in -------------.&nbsp;&nbsp; As my financial background is low to support the master course I was searching for the scholarship courses in Europe in internet. When I saw this course I got a great interest in it, as it is fulfilling my desire of higher education in interesting field.</P> <P>&nbsp;</P> <P>&nbsp;</P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; I am very eager to study a course in Europe which is my favorite place for higher education. When I come to know that part of this study is in&nbsp;------------------I am very happy that, it is one of the oldest and top ten rated university in Europe and my friends spoken very highly of medical education in Europe.</P> <P>&nbsp;</P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Accomplishing this master program will enable me to achieve a broader knowledge on treatment of disabled patients. It will also grant me a international experience and treatment method. On obtaining this masters program I am planning to increase facilities in our area to rehabilitate the disabled patients to their fullest possible capacity. Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive reply.</P> <P>&nbsp;</P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </P> <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Yours truly,</P> <P>&nbsp;</P><div style="clear:both;"></div>