http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetterWriting-EnglishLanguage/Forum5.htmFormal Letter writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, invitation, CV, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter in the English language.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)http://www.englishforums.com/English/FirstWritingMotivationLetter/zjkxh/post.htm#464957Wed, 16 Jan 2008 13:38:57 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:464957Pilot1230http://www.englishforums.com/English/FirstWritingMotivationLetter/zjkxh/post.htm#464957http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-464957.xmlZomg sorry guys, I made a huge spelling mistake in the title :-D I didn't write the "R" in "YOUR". <br><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/FirstWritingMotivationLetter/zjknj/post.htmWed, 16 Jan 2008 13:02:32 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:464942Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/FirstWritingMotivationLetter/zjknj/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-464942.xmlHey guys and girls.<br><br>This is the first time I post something here. I've seen you guys help a lot of people and it would be great if you could just read through this bit of text to see what you think.<br><br>Tekst (without my name, ...): <br><br> <p><font color="#0000ff">Concerning any current or future employment as a First Officer at Brussels Airlines. </font></p> <p><font color="#0000ff">&nbsp;<br>Dear Mr./Ms. …,</font></p> <p><font color="#0000ff">I have great aspirations for the future of Brussels Airlines and would love to be part of the story. Ever since I was a few months old and made a first flight I forged a connection with aviation. I would love to share this passion with Brussels Airlines.</font></p> <p><font color="#0000ff">It is rare to find a leading European establishment that provides the prospects of a long interesting career and the dynamics of a young firm. The diverse fleet and varied destinations across Europe and Africa are very appealing to me. Contributing to a group that drives toward the further success of the company dominating Brussels Airport - the heart of the E.U. – will always be a dream of mine.&nbsp; <font color="#000000">(I'm not sure if the reason is visible in here, what do you guys think?)</font> </font></p> <p><font color="#0000ff">I chose Sabena Flight Academy because they force you to go beyond what is required from a JAA pilot. Through their high level of experience I hope to offer the best of skills. This learning event, in combination with: my strong sense of responsibility, team spirit, flexibility, loyalty, and assertiveness could be of added value to Brussels Airlines.</font></p> <p><font color="#0000ff">In support of my application, I eagerly await your feedback. <font color="#000000">(I need something to say that i need to meet face to face in here)</font><br></font></p><p><font color="#0000ff">Yours sincerely,</font></p> <font color="#0000ff">name<br><br><font color="#000000">Thanks a lot<br><br>P.S.: I know it needs improving :-)<br><br></font></font><div style="clear:both;"></div>