http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetterWriting-EnglishLanguage/Forum5.htmFormal Letter writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, invitation, CV, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter in the English language.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlCheckMyEngToCorrect/zjpzb/post.htm#466243Sat, 19 Jan 2008 16:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:466243Clive0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlCheckMyEngToCorrect/zjpzb/post.htm#466243http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-466243.xml<P>Hi Safeer,</P> <P>I think that no-one wants to reply because you have too may sentences here. It's also very confusing when you don't write ech sentence on a separate line. It makes it hard to read.</P> <P>I'm just going to correct your first one..</P> <P><FONT color=#0000ff>I want a girl is cooking good and her knowledge. </FONT><FONT color=#000000>I want a girl who can cook well and who&nbsp;has good knowledge.</FONT></P> <P>Do you have any questions about this? Would you like to try to write a few more sentences like this one?</P> <P>Best wishes, Clive</P><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlCheckMyEngToCorrect/zjnnd/post.htmFri, 18 Jan 2008 12:21:45 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:465803safeer1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlCheckMyEngToCorrect/zjnnd/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-465803.xml<P>I want a girl is cooking good and her knowledge. I will engage to be married to her.&nbsp; Shanti helps me to get the job good. I have already applied my Resume to her enable India office with disability. If I will get a job then my one month will pay salary to her. I will get it after 2 months. I want a new SIM card for message free. Do you know which SIM card is the best of message free? I will donate for you. Do you want anything specialist? Don’t disturb you to call to vibrate my mobile. I sent a message to Sajeer for no reply. Thank you very much for helping my English improved. I am always writing the sentence English to send website at English forums to correct it. I need to practice to be learned. I couldn’t read the bible but I have hidden it. I received railway recruitment cell by post but I didn’t like to go to Mumbai for an interview. I got my passport. I could my shake hand to other people but I don’t talk sign language to them. I am boring to look nothing in the marriage. Tank is dirty. I will brush it to be cleaned with water. I want to marry in age is 30. My passport will send to me by post. I will write sign and take it and pay Rs 20 to postman. You improved good your English than me. I am in the bus to sit to have dream nothing. I want to chat to you from Google talk. I think you don’t like to chat with me. As per the order from government that all bike riders must wear the helmet. Violation of this rule will be imposed a fine of Rs 100.</P><div style="clear:both;"></div>