http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetter-Writing/Forum5.htmFormal letter-writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, or invitation letter, CVs, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/2/zlzbc/Post.htm#699438Mon, 20 Apr 2009 12:47:43 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:699438Grammar Geek0http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/2/zlzbc/Post.htm#699438http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-699438.xmlPlz I want that if you can give me an example of an application from a father to a principal of a school where his son is studying for fee concession Plz read the thread and you'll see one.http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/2/zlzbc/Post.htm#699421Mon, 20 Apr 2009 11:14:40 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:699421Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/2/zlzbc/Post.htm#699421http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-699421.xmlPlz I want that if you can give me an example of an application from a father to a principal of a school where his son is studying for fee concessionhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/2/zlzbc/Post.htm#474005Sun, 25 Jan 2009 19:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:474005Yoong Liat2http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/2/zlzbc/Post.htm#474005http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-474005.xmlOne minor point: In BrE it is Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully.http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/2/zlzbc/Post.htm#473864Wed, 25 Mar 2009 19:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:473864Mister Micawber3http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/2/zlzbc/Post.htm#473864http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-473864.xmlDean, College of **** (or) Chairman, Department of **** Sorry, but, Sir, I've been asked to directly address the principal. Will it be wrong to do so? -- Universities in my country do not have principals; principals are heads of primary and secondary schools. Dear Dr : I don't know his name. Will it be wrong to say "Dear Sir"?-- Only if you cannot manage to learn his/her name. I have completed my intermediation (diploma ? certificate ?) -- it would be better to spell it out in full: High School Certificate (?) in pre-enghttp://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/2/zlzbc/Post.htm#473821Wed, 25 Mar 2009 19:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:473821Mister Nutty4http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/2/zlzbc/Post.htm#473821http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-473821.xmlDear Yankee, thanks for your kind suggestions, too. I am very thankful to both of you for helping me. Thank you very much indeed. Yankee wrote: Hi Mr Nutty Here is a suggestion for improvement. Rather than simply looking for grammar errors, I've done some rewording: EDIT: I see that Mister Micawber has also now replied. I like his suggestions too, and agree with his suggestion that you include your educational records. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ (My Address) Apartment Name Area Name City Name Date (Recipient's address) Dean of Admissions University Name Arehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473812Sun, 25 Jan 2009 19:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:473812Mister Nutty5http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473812http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-473812.xmlSo, finally I got help. Thank you very much, Mister Micawber. Full return mailing address Okay, as you say Sir. Date Okay, as you say Sir. Dean, College of **** Sorry, but, Sir, I've been asked to directly address the principal. Will it be wrong to do so? (or) Chairman, Department of **** University Name Full mailing address Dear Dr : I don't know his name. Will it be wrong to say "Dear Sir"? I have completed my intermediation (diploma ? certificate ?) [thank you again, Sir. Yes, it's a certificate. Can Ihttp://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473800Sun, 25 Jan 2009 19:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:473800Yankee6http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473800http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-473800.xmlHi Mr Nutty Here is a suggestion for improvement. Rather than simply looking for grammar errors, I've done some rewording: EDIT: I see that Mister Micawber has also now replied. I like his suggestions too, and agree with his suggestion that you include your educational records. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ (My Address) Apartment Name Area Name City Name Date (Recipient's address) Dean of Admissions University Name Area Name City Name Dear (Name), Having completed my pre-engineering coursework, I would now like to pursue a degree in B.E. (telecom.) at your esteemed. university. From the time I was in elementary...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473797Mon, 25 May 2009 18:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:473797Mister Micawber7http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473797http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-473797.xmlI'm here, Mr Nutty. Full return mailing address Date Dean, College of **** (or) Chairman, Department of **** University Name Full mailing address Dear Dr : I have completed my intermediation (diploma ? certificate ?) in pre-engineering, and would like to pursue a BE (Telecommunications) degree at ABC University . I have always been interested in telecommunications , and more recently I have narrowed my goal to becoming a telecommunications engineer. Enclosed/attached are my educational records. Since my family is unable to bear the full cost of tuition, c ould you advise me of any financial assistance available? Thank you very much for your time and consideration. ...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473774Wed, 25 Feb 2009 19:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:473774Mister Nutty8http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473774http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-473774.xmlAnyone there?http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473772Mon, 25 May 2009 18:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:473772Anonymous9http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473772http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-473772.xmlAnyone there?http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473477Wed, 25 Feb 2009 19:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:473477Mister Nutty10http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473477http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-473477.xmlNow, could someone please have a look at the letter for mistakes?http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473401Mon, 25 May 2009 18:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:473401Mister Nutty11http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473401http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-473401.xmlHi again, Will someone please take a look at the following letter for any grammar mistakes? Thank you _____________________________________________________________________ (My Address) Apartment Name Area Name City Name Date (Recipient's address) The principal University Name Area Name City Name Dear Sir, This is to state that I have completed my intermediation in pre-engineering, and now I want to pursue a degree in B.E. (telecom.) at your highly estimable university. Literally, since I was in elementary school I have been interested in telecommunication, and more recently, I have narrowed my goal to become a telecommunication engineer. It has always been my and...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473158Mon, 25 May 2009 18:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:473158Clive12http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htm#473158http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-473158.xmlHi, The best thing is if you begin yourself by writing what you would say if you were talking face to face with the person responsible. Then we can offer you comments to improve your writing. After all, only you know why you think you should receive assistance. Clivehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htmSun, 25 Jan 2009 19:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:473112Mister Nutty13http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationLetter/zlzbc/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-473112.xmlHi, Can someone plz tell me how to write a fee concession/assisstance application letter? It'll be better, if you give me some samples, too. Thank you