ESL, Formal, General & Business Letter Writing (English language)

Re: could you check a part 1 of my CV, please?

Clive — Mon, 07 Apr 2008 12:06:02 GMT

Hi,

why is there no article before content ? In a context like this, 'content' is often treated as uncountable.

here's another part, would you mind taking a look?

The service is used by newspapers (e.g. Time << this is a magazine, not a newspaper) as well. Users can take a picture of a particular article (some articles are marked with a special sign) and receive additional information about it (e.g. film etc <<< I think you need to clarify your meaning here.) All information is indexed by images. The system recognises them and selects related ~~to them~~ information.

Best wishes, Clive

Re: could you check a part 1 of my CV, please?

anglista2008 — Mon, 07 Apr 2008 10:12:31 GMT

thanks Clive,

why is there no article before conten ?

here's another part, would you mind taking a look?

The service is used by newspaper (e.g. Time) as well. Users can take a picture of a particular article (some articles are marked with a special sign) and receive additional information about it (e.g. film etc.) All information are indexed by images. The system recognises images and selects related to them information.

thanks,

Re: could you check a part 1 of my CV, please?

Clive — Sun, 06 Apr 2008 16:10:20 GMT

Hi,

ISB - iis a picture based search engine. With their mobile phones, users can take a picture of an object of interest and send this picture via MMS to a dedicated service number. A response is delivered to the user containing useful information and links. Most services are reached via one number. Content is selected by an image, eg when an user sends a photo of an object, the dedicated server generates an answer which is based upon user-updated data.

Clive.

Re: could you check a part 1 of my CV, please?

anglista2008 — Sun, 06 Apr 2008 15:56:48 GMT

this is just a small part of my CV... anyway, could you check if there are any mistakes here? thanks

Re: could you check a part 1 of my CV, please?

Clive — Sun, 06 Apr 2008 15:29:46 GMT

Hi,

Here's my immediate reaction on reading this.

Your CV should tell me about you. This tells me nothing about you.

Best wishes, Clive

could you check a part 1 of my CV, please?

anglista2008 — Sun, 06 Apr 2008 11:47:19 GMT

Hey there!

Could you correct any mistakes? Thanks lot in advance!

ISB - it is a picture based search engine. With their mobile phones, Users can take a picture of an object of interest and send this picture via MMS to a dedicated service number. A response is delivered to the/a User containing useful information and links. Most of services are reached under one number. (the ???) Content is selected by an image, eg. when an user sends a photo of an object, the dedicated server generates an (the?) answer which is based upon the user updated (updated by users ???) data (datebase ???).