http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetterWriting-EnglishLanguage/Forum5.htmFormal Letter writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, invitation, CV, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter in the English language.enCSMOD (Build: 3191.21962)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/grgdl/post.htm#502922Sun, 20 Apr 2008 08:23:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:502922Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/grgdl/post.htm#502922http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-502922.xml<p>thanks</p> <p>&nbsp;</p><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/grgrk/post.htm#502870Sun, 20 Apr 2008 02:42:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:502870Mister Micawber1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/grgrk/post.htm#502870http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-502870.xml.<br />I have underlined some problem areas:<br /><br /><br />Dear <span style="text-decoration:underline;">Sir/Madame</span>,<br /><br />I am Katerina Ignatova from<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> the University</span> of Veliko Turnovo and I would like to study at <span style="text-decoration:underline;">Your University</span> as a part of the Erasmus <span style="text-decoration:underline;">programme</span>.<br /><br />I <span style="text-decoration:underline;">am</span> born and raised in Bulgaria. My language education started when I was 6 years old. I attended a foreign <span style="text-decoration:underline;">languages</span> oriented school and concentrated on both<span style="text-decoration:underline;">,</span> Russian (for the first 7 years) and English (from 8th grade to now). I fell in love with the foreign languages. My goal became to improve my knowledge in Russian and English. <strike>But I did know that these two languages are not enough. <br /><br /></strike>Now I study English and French at the University of Veliko Turnovo. I really <span style="text-decoration:underline;">love French language</span>. <span style="text-decoration:underline;">It’s</span> a difficult language, but at the same time so soft and beautiful. I participate in the Erasmus <span style="text-decoration:underline;">exchange programme</span> because I would love to <span style="text-decoration:underline;">study English language</span>, English literature and history in <span style="text-decoration:underline;">France. Because</span> <strike>I am absolutely convinced that</strike> Université Catholique De L’Ouest provides its students with an excellent education.<br /><br />Not only do I want to study English at<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> Your University</span>, but also I would love to improve my French. I know that the <span style="text-decoration:underline;">best</span> to improve a foreign language is to practise it in a <span style="text-decoration:underline;">Native</span> <span style="text-decoration:underline;">sphere</span>. And I will be able to do that through my everyday life and my courses. <strike>I read a lot about </strike>Université Catholique De L’Ouest<strike>.It</strike> is a very prestigious university that provides excellent education and ensures the success of its students. I fell in love with “La ville Noire” as well. It’s <span style="text-decoration:underline;">so </span>interesting, beautiful, ancient city .The sights of the town are just <span style="text-decoration:underline;">remarkable, the</span> gardens are magnificent! I hope that after my graduation from the university, I will work as an interpreter or translator.<br /><br />I believe that one semester at Université Catholique De L’Ouest will give me a lot of experience, knowledge and confidence for my future career. I thank you for your time and <span style="text-decoration:underline;">I’m</span> looking forward to hearing from you.<br /><br />Sincerely <strong>yours,</strong><br /><br />Katerina Ignatova<br /><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/grznb/post.htmSat, 19 Apr 2008 22:24:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:502793Anonymous2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/grznb/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-502793.xml<p>Hey guys.I found this site yesterday and it&#39;s absolutely amazing.It&#39;s so nice of you to help us<img src="http://www.englishforums.com/emoticons/emotion-5.gif" alt="Wink" title="Wink" /> with&nbsp;such writings, which sometimes are so important to us.So...please please please, may someone just see my motivation letter and comment it.Please, please, please!</p> <h1><span>Dear Sir/Madame,</span></h1> <h1><span>&nbsp;</span></h1> <h1><span>I am Katerina Ignatova from the University of Veliko Turnovo and I would like to study at Your University as a part of the Erasmus programme.</span></h1> <h1><span>I am born and raised in Bulgaria. My language education started when I was 6 years old. </span><span style="COLOR:black;">I attended a foreign languages oriented school and concentrated&nbsp;</span><span style="COLOR:black;">on both, Russian(for the first 7 years) and English(from 8th grade to now). I fell in love with the foreign languages. My goal became to improve my knowledge in Russian and English. But I did know that these two languages are not enough. Now I study English and French at the University of Veliko Turnovo. I really love French language. It’s a difficult language, but at the same time so soft and beautiful.</span></h1> <h1 style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><span style="COLOR:black;">I participate in the Erasmus exchange programme because I would love to study English language, English literature and history in France. Because I am absolutely convinced that Uni</span><span style="COLOR:black;">versité Catholique De L’Ouest provides its students with an excellent education. Not only do I want to study English at Your University, but also I would love to improve my French. I know that the best to improve a foreign language is to practise it in a Native sphere.</span><span> And I will be able to do that through my everyday life and my courses. </span></h1> <h1><span style="COLOR:black;">I read a lot about Uni</span><span style="COLOR:black;">versité Catholique De L’Ouest.It is a very prestigious university that provides excellent education and ensures the success of its students. I fell in love with “La ville Noire” as well. It’s so interesting, beautiful, ancient city .The sights of the town are just remarkable, the gardens are magnificent!</span></h1> <h1 style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><span style="COLOR:black;"><span>&nbsp;</span></span><span>I hope that after my graduation from the university, I will work as an interpreter or translator. I believe that one semester at </span><span style="COLOR:black;">Uni</span><span style="COLOR:black;">versité Catholique De L’Ouest</span><span> will give me a lot of experience, knowledge and confidence for my future career.</span></h1> <h1 style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><span>I thank you for your time and I’m looking forward to hearing from you.</span></h1> <h1 style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><span>&nbsp;</span></h1> <h1 style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><span>&nbsp;</span></h1> <h1 style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><span>&nbsp;</span></h1> <h1 style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><span>&nbsp;</span></h1> <h1 style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><span>&nbsp;</span></h1> <h1 style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><span>Sincerely:</span></h1> <h1 style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><span>Katerina Ignatova</span></h1> <p>I will be very thankful<a href="mailto:funny_spirit@abv.bg"></a></p><div style="clear:both;"></div>