http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetterWriting-EnglishLanguage/Forum5.htmFormal Letter writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, invitation, CV, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter in the English language.enCSMOD (Build: 3125.9045)http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldFollowingLetter/gbppk/post.htm#510639Wed, 07 May 2008 03:49:37 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:510639Mister Micawber0http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldFollowingLetter/gbppk/post.htm#510639http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-510639.xml.<br /><span>As you suggested, I have contacted other schools regarding<strong> the </strong>City of ABC Arts &amp; Music Festival and <strong>have</strong> received very <strong>positive</strong> responses.<br /><br />One of the teachers<strong> told</strong> me<strong> that</strong> <strong>the My Tho students</strong> had performed a <strong>show</strong> tune at&nbsp;Cho <strong>County&#39;s</strong> 75th Birthday and received<strong> enthusiastic</strong> <strong>applause</strong>. I think it would be great if this group could participate in <strong>the</strong> City of&nbsp;ABC Arts &amp; Music Festival.<strong><br /><br />Would</strong> you know <strong>whom I could</strong> contact about this?</span><br /><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldFollowingLetter/gbppw/post.htmWed, 07 May 2008 03:45:40 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:510637Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldFollowingLetter/gbppw/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-510637.xml<p><span>&nbsp;Is this letter grammatically correct? Would you help me writing this letter in a friendly and nice way? Thank you in advance for your help.</span></p> <p><span>As you suggested, I have contacted other schools regarding City of ABC Arts &amp; Music Festival and received very well responses. One of the teachers has told me the students at My Tho had performed a shown tune at&nbsp;Cho County&nbsp;75th Birthday and received great applauses. I think it would be great if this group could participate in City of&nbsp;ABC Arts &amp; Music Festival. Do you know who would be the person I could contact about this?</span></p><div style="clear:both;"></div>