Your help about a Letter of motivation for BMW

Sanji — Fri, 16 May 2008 18:15:24 GMT

Hello,

First I m sorry about my very bad control in English.

I need some urgent help in writing a letter of motivation for BMW group for application job !

I have tried writing one by myself but it's not coming like I hope.

Can somebody please have a look at it below and make any necessary changes / corrections for me ?

This is my Letter :

Dear Sir, Dear Madam,

Two principal criteria direct my choice towards your Group BMW :

To integrate very a large company and to choose a âjob with prospectsâ.

Your company answers these two waiting is since your group is ones of the pioneers in the automobile field and new technologies, which integrate them. Moreover, gives the means of being present on the markets in strong progression and with high potential.

Your company is particularly attractive because it offers the face impassioning of modern automobile and corresponds best to my technical curiosity. I am sure to profit there from a prosperous environment where the strong reactivity of the market is an additional emulation.

I remain at your disposal for further information and asks you to approve, Sir, Madam, the expression of my sincerity.

Thank you for your Help !!!

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Your help about a Letter of motivation for BMW