ESL, Formal, General & Business Letter Writing (English language)

Re: Please check my bank letter....

Mister Micawber — Mon, 23 Jun 2008 06:06:36 GMT

Is it correct Subject for this letter ("Misbehaviour Branch Manager")

No, this is quite patronizing, and should only be used of children, if at all. Also, it is not your place to judge or suggest chastising anyone except your own subordinates; merely state the incident and let the appropriate authority deal with the situation.

Your letter does not need a Subject line; most letters do not. If you feel that one is necessary, then something like: Difficulty with Online Banking Application.

Re: Please check my bank letter....

Riyasknr — Mon, 23 Jun 2008 05:53:54 GMT

Sorry my dear friend...

I don't know exactely where I can post. That's why I posted both side. In future I will post only one thread.

Please give a correct Subject for this letter. Is it correct Subject for this letter ("Misbehaviour Brach Manager"). Please tell me.

Thanks & Best Regards,
Ur's riya

Re: Please check my bank letter....

Grammar Geek — Sun, 22 Jun 2008 17:07:46 GMT

I have joined the two threads you started that asked the same question. In the future, please post your question in only ONE thread. Thank you.

Re: Please check my bank letter....

RonBee — Sun, 22 Jun 2008 15:39:27 GMT

Riyasknr
Dear friends...
Iâm complaining bank branch manager to head office. Please check my letter and let me know my grammar mistakes...

Say:
I am complaining about the branch bank manager to the head office. Please check my letter and correct my grammar mistakes.

Iâm complaining to the head office about the bank branch manager . Please check my letter and correct my grammar mistakes.

Riyasknr — Sun, 22 Jun 2008 13:44:56 GMT

Thanks my dear friends.... Your sincere replies....

Please give me a correct Subject for this letter. Is it correct subject (Misbehaviour Branch Manager!) ???

Ur's riya

Re: Please check my bank letter....

Mister Micawber — Sun, 22 Jun 2008 02:08:02 GMT

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Dear Sir,

I have held SB account (10721555221) in your bank since August 2004.

For the last two years I haven't used this account, but now I would like to put it to use. On the first of this month I spoke to your manager, who told me that I needed to deposit a minimum balance of Rs.1000. I deposited Rs.2500 to my account on 3 June.

Yesterday (date) I went to my bank regarding its online banking service. I submitted an online banking application to the manager, who asked me why I wanted online service. He demanded that I first maintain my minimum balance, and he questioned my frequent visits to the bank. I told him that I had already deposited Rs.2500, but he seemed not to have heard a word I said, and would not accept my application.

I find this kind or behaviour rude and disrespectful.

Please ensure that my online banking application is accepted and active my online banking service soon as possible.

I would appreciate your prompt service on this matter. Thank you very much.

Regards,

Urâs Riya

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Re: Please check my grammar mistakes...

RonBee — Sat, 21 Jun 2008 15:27:46 GMT

Say:
Iâm complaining to the head office about the bank branch manager . Please check my letter and correct my grammar mistakes.

~R

(Can you change the title of this thread?)

Re: Please check my grammar mistakes...

Grammar Geek — Sat, 21 Jun 2008 14:55:30 GMT

Hello Riyasknr

Never post information in the forums. Just leave a blank space.

Dear Sir,

My name is <<name>> and my SB account number is <<number>>. I have been a customer of your bank since August 2004, although I have not used this account for the last two years.

Recently, I wanted to use my account, so on the first of the month, I spoke to teh bank manager <<at the branch office located in ____>>. He said that the first thin I must do is deposit the minimum balance of Rs.1000, so I deposited Rs.2500 to my account on 3rd June 2008.

Yesterday, I went to the bank to inquire about using the Online Banking Service. I gave the online banking application to bank manager.

He spoke to me in an extremely disrespectful way, challenging my desire to use the online service and telling me I first needed to maintain the minimum balance. When I told him that I had already I deposited Rs.2500, he didn't seem to hear me and didn't give me any suitable answers. I was very displeased with how he treated me.

I am enclosing my online banking application and request that you activate my online banking service soon as possible. I would also appreciate it if you addressed the bank manager's rude and disrespectful behavior with him.

Regards,

If you want the person you're writing to to address the person's behavior, you must tell him which bank office this happened at, and the manager's name, if you have it.

Re: Please check my grammar mistakes...

siva-gobi — Sat, 21 Jun 2008 14:05:18 GMT

Last two years I ~~didn't~~ have not use my bank account.

///talk kindly to with customers// this is better

Re: Please check my grammar mistakes...

siva-gobi — Sat, 21 Jun 2008 14:03:33 GMT

21.06.2008

Dear Sir,

I'm (<<name removed by moderator>>) holding SB account (<<number removed by moderator>>) in your bank since August 2004.

Last two years I didn't use my bank account. Now I would like to continue account that's why, frist of this month I spoke to bank manager. He said, immediately you put minimum balance Rs.1000. That's why, I deposited Rs.2500 to my account on 3rd June 2008. Yesterday I went to bank regarding Online Banking Service. I gave Online banking application to bank manager. He says... Why do u want online service?... you are putting 300, 500... First you keep your minimum balance. Why you are coming often to bank. He is was talking like unrespectable. I ~~said~~ told, ~~already~~ I already deposited Rs.2500. He is was not hearing ~~my words~~ what i am saying . He didnât care to give a proper answer to me. Please tell to him for talk kindly to customers. Please accept ~~my online banking~~ ~~application~~ and active my online banking service soon as possible.

Iâm very appreciating your early action and promptly service.

Thanking youâ¦

Regards,

Urâs riya

Re: Please check my grammar mistakes...

Riyasknr — Sat, 21 Jun 2008 13:26:42 GMT

Dear friend...

I wrote... Only one bank manager, not three managers. Frist time he spoke to me kindly. Second time he get angry with me.

Ur's roua

Re: Please check my grammar mistakes...

siva-gobi — Sat, 21 Jun 2008 12:51:09 GMT

HI Sir realy i am confused by you letter Becouce, You talk about three manager. First manager, you want to informe the account to him, second who told deposite Rs1000, third who didn't respect to you.

Please check my grammar mistakes...

Riyasknr — Sat, 21 Jun 2008 12:21:22 GMT

Dear friends...

Iâm complaining bank branch manager to head office. Please check my letter and let me know my grammar mistakes...

**

21.06.2008

Dear Sir,

I'm (<<name removed by moderator>>) holding SB account (<<number removed by moderator>>) in your bank since August 2004.

Last two years I didn't use my bank account. Now I would like to continue account that's why, frist of this month I spoke to bank manager. He said, immediately you put minimum balance Rs.1000. That's why, I deposited Rs.2500 to my account on 3rd June 2008. Yesterday I went to bank regarding Online Banking Service. I gave Online banking application to bank manager. He says... Why do u want online service?... you are putting 300, 500... First you keep your minimum balance. Why you are coming often to bank. He is talking like unrespectable. I said, already I deposited Rs.2500. He is not hearing my words. He didnât give proper answer to me. Please tell him to talk kindly to customers. Please accept my online banking application and active my online banking service soon as possible.

Iâm very appreciating your early action and promptly service.

Thanking youâ¦

Regards,

Urâs riya

Please check my bank letter....

Riyasknr — Sat, 21 Jun 2008 08:39:02 GMT

Dear friends...
Iâm complaining bank branch manager to head office. Please check my letter and let me know my grammar mistakes...

**

21.06.2008

Dear Sir,

I'm (Mohamed Riyasudeen) holding SB account (10721555221) in your bank since August 2004.

Last two years I didn't use my bank account. Now I would like to continue account that's why, frist of this month I spoke to bank manager. He said, immediately you put minimum balance Rs.1000. That's why, I deposited Rs.2500 to my account on 3rd June 2008. Yesterday I went to bank regarding Online Banking Service. I gave Online banking application to bank manager. He says... Why do u want online service?... you are putting 300, 500... First you keep your minimum balance. Why you are coming often to bank. He is talking like unrespectable. I said, already I deposited Rs.2500. He is not hearing my words. He didnât give proper answer to me. Please tell him to talk kindly to customers. Please accept my online banking application and active my online banking service soon as possible.

Iâm very appreciating your early action and promptly service.

Thanking youâ¦

Regards,

Urâs riya

ESL, Formal, General & Business Letter Writing (English language)

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