ESL, Formal, General & Business Letter Writing (English language)

Re: letter writitng- request for change in designation

Anonymous — Tue, 22 Jul 2008 02:49:18 GMT

Re. Change of designation

I would like to sincerely propose miss selvarani to change her designation from ward assistant to ward clerk with the aggreable by her. working hours from 8.30am to 4.30pm., one hour lunch.

Re: letter writitng- request for change in designation

kaviraj — Sun, 13 Jul 2008 08:31:53 GMT

Thank You Dear Mr. Wordy

I, am really sorry for late reply. The correction made by you in my letter draft really helped me a lot. Thanks again

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Re: letter writitng- request for change in designation

Mr Wordy — Mon, 30 Jun 2008 20:54:52 GMT

Mr. XYZ
Vice President
XYZ Corporation
Mumbai

Dear Mr. XYZ

Re: Change of Designation.

I would like to sincerely thank you for promoting me to the position of Assistant ["Asst." isn't wrong as an abbreviation, but in my view it's better to write the word in full here] Manager in XYZ Corporation. This is an opportunity for advancement, and I am very pleased to accept this ~~offer~~ promotion.

~~Sir~~ As you know, ~~that since last 3years~~ I have for the past three years been working for projects (Execution) [If "projects/execution" is the name of a division/function of the company then this is OK, but it should be capitalised ("Projects"). If it isn't, then this doesn't read too well] and ~~was not~~ have not been associated with quantity surveying work [I think "surveying" would be the more usual word here, but ignore me if you know better] although I joined as a Quantity Surveyor. It is my request to change my designation from Assistant Manager, Quantity Surveying [again, ignore me if you know better] to Assistant Manager, Civil. [I'm not sure if this is correct or not. Should it be "Civil Engineering" or something? You would know, I guess.]

I would again like to ~~again~~ thank you and my other seniors for the expression of faith in my abilities that ~~they~~ you have exhibited by this gesture, and I assure you that I will ~~definitely~~ continue to be an asset to the company in my new role.

Respectfully Yours,

letter writitng- request for change in designation

kaviraj — Mon, 30 Jun 2008 13:00:20 GMT

Hi everybody

This is my 1st post!

Please help me. i want to write a letter to my boss for change of my designation. letter draft is as below please correct me.

To,

Mr. XYZ
Vice president
XYZ Corporation
mumbai

Dear Mr. XYZ

Sub:- Change of Designation.

I would like to sincerely thank you for promoting me to the position of Asst. Manager in XYZ corporation. This is an opportunity for advancement so i am very pleased to accept this offer.

Sir as you know that since last 3years i have been working for projects (Execution) and was not associated with Quantity Survey Work althoug i joined as a Quantity Surveyor. It is my request to change my designation from Asst. Manager Quantity Survey to Asst. Manager Civil.

I would like to again thank you and my seniors fot the expression of faith in my abilities that they have exhibited by this gesture and i assure you that i will definitely be an asset for the company

Respectfully Yours,

XYZ