http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetterWriting-EnglishLanguage/Forum5.htmFormal Letter writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, invitation, CV, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter in the English language.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)http://www.englishforums.com/English/RefineRequestLetterRecommendation/ggprw/post.htm#534947Tue, 01 Jul 2008 01:49:37 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:534947Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/RefineRequestLetterRecommendation/ggprw/post.htm#534947http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-534947.xmlPleease someone give me some feedback!<br />THANKS<div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/RefineRequestLetterRecommendation/ggxgw/post.htmMon, 30 Jun 2008 17:20:06 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:534760Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/RefineRequestLetterRecommendation/ggxgw/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-534760.xmlPlease help me refine it so that it sounds coherent and flows better ..THANKS!<br /><br /> <p><font>Dear Professor ***,</font></p> <p><font>&nbsp;</font></p> <p><font>I am planning to apply to&nbsp;***&#39;s graduate program for the 2009-2010 school year. As part of the application I need a letter of reference and you were the first person that I thought of. I really value your perspective because I learned a lot from you and you brought out the best in me.<span style="COLOR:red;"> </span>I was wondering if you would be able to write me a letter of recommendation in the next two weeks as the application is due on July 15^th? Please let me know as soon as possible and I will send you further details! </font></p> <p><font>&nbsp;</font></p><span><span>&nbsp;</span>I am actually an Audit Intern at a regional accounting firm called “***” in the *** area for the summer, and my communication skills have already been put to good use (even as an accountant!). I have been going out to client sites and interacting with a diverse set of clients on a day-to-day basis. I thank you for helping equip me to deal with my professional duties in an appropriate manner. <br /><br />Will be grateful if you can suggest an ending line.<br />THANKS!!</span><div style="clear:both;"></div>