http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetterWriting-EnglishLanguage/Forum5.htmFormal Letter writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, invitation, CV, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter in the English language.enCSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectLetter/gwlcv/post.htmSat, 19 Jul 2008 19:37:35 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:543647Jaberdene0http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectLetter/gwlcv/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-543647.xmlHi<br /> <br /> Can anybody correct following letter, please ASAP.<br /> <br /> <strong>I just turned eighteen last November. Im a second year student at *** university <br /> I was invited by my parents who live in UK at the moment&nbsp; during my summer<br /> term&nbsp; holiday to visit them.<br /> My mother will pay all of my visit money which would be&nbsp; about 5000USD. <br /> The money will be withdrawn by me from my mother&#39;s savings account resides in *** bank . <br /> I&#39;ll take the money with me when I arrive in UK.<br /> I have an access&nbsp; to take money out from that savings cos </strong><strong>I am the shared account holder of that savings. </strong><strong>.<br /> </strong><br /> Thanks a lot<br /> JE<br /><div style="clear:both;"></div>