http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetter-Writing/Forum5.htmFormal letter-writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, or invitation letter, CVs, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter.enXMOD (Build: 3614.32638)http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/gqdbr/post.htm#580774Sun, 24 May 2009 00:04:10 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:580774gorodman0http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/gqdbr/post.htm#580774http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-580774.xmlThanks for your comment! You are quete right. I'll try to remake the letter according to your remark.http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/gqdbr/post.htm#580631Tue, 24 Feb 2009 01:04:10 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:580631Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/gqdbr/post.htm#580631http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-580631.xmlhey, the letter is good. At least for me. I'd say, however, that you wrote too much about how great you are and can do. i mean it is ok to do so- but not so explicitely. it strikes me the most. Otherwise great. Good job. Remember that's my own opinion and others may not agree with me :))http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/gqdbr/post.htmFri, 24 Apr 2009 00:04:10 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:580618gorodman2http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/gqdbr/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-580618.xmlHi there! Could you be so kind to check my motivation letter. I will be really glad to see any comments. I also hope my letter will bring to someone an idea what to write in his letter of motivation. Thanks a lot Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you because I have a strong desire to study in *** Program. My dream is to be a high qualified manager. I want to be a specialist who has thorough understanding of how the manufacturing and business processes are organized and who is able to use control mechanisms and a high-level strategic underpinning in project management. While studying in *** I have made great strides. I can even say that I have become one of the best students of the university. I have been always maintaining an excellent...