http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetter-Writing/Forum5.htmFormal letter-writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, or invitation letter, CVs, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/2/hrbdq/Post.htm#585376Thu, 26 Feb 2009 05:28:18 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:585376Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/2/hrbdq/Post.htm#585376http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-585376.xmlHi, I have no words. Thank you very much for this fantastic job that you did on my letter, I honestly think that now the letter is perfect. I will take, of course, all your suggestions. And I have to thank you all your patience to read, correct and submit all of this. Great work from your side. Thank you very much for all. Best regards, José Pedro Cardosohttp://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/hrbdq/post.htm#585054Thu, 26 Feb 2009 05:28:18 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:585054AlpheccaStars1http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/hrbdq/post.htm#585054http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-585054.xmlJosé: This is my second try - something went wrong when I posted the last time. Your letter is very good - I have made some suggestions for improvement. Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to express my great interest in applying for the ACEOLE Programme(or program ?) (British English is programme , American English is program ) at CERN, which I truly believe will be the key for my goals in life: investigation and lecturing. After having completed done a B S c and a M S c in Engineering, it is the time to start with the PhD in Electrical and Computer Engineering (FEUP). This is would be a unique opportunity to work as an investigator , in the most prestigious particle physics laboratory in the world and, at the same time, take the...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/hrbdq/post.htmThu, 26 Feb 2009 05:28:19 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:585003Anonymous2http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/hrbdq/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-585003.xmlDear Masters, Can you please review my motivation letter for CERN ? Please feel free to cut lines of paragraphs that you might think that don't apply. Best regards, José Pedro Cardoso Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to express my great interest in applying for the ACEOLE Programme(or program ?) at CERN, which I truly believe will be the key for my goals in life: investigation and lecturing. After having done a Bsc and a Msc in Engineering, it is the time to start with the PhD in Electrical and Computer Engineering (FEUP). This is a unique opportunity to work as an investigator, in the most prestigious particle physics laboratory in the world and, at the same time, take the PhD at FEUP (CERN’s Partner on “ASIC building blocks for...