http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetter-Writing/Forum5.htmFormal letter-writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, or invitation letter, CVs, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter.enXMOD (Build: 3598.39794)http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/2/hbccg/Post.htm#594454Wed, 08 Apr 2009 07:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:594454ayumiyoshi13140http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/2/hbccg/Post.htm#594454http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-594454.xmlGreetings friends, My pleasure to let you knwo about 7 C's... complete concrete courteous considerate correctness completeness clarity We sould consider these " C's " before writing a letter. Hopefully you will get what i mean to say about. hmmm ! Thankooo # 3 and #4 are the same. They both have the same meaning. #1 and #6 are the same and #6 should not be there. But I do agree the seven c's are VERY important.(now they are the 5 c's )http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/2/hbccg/Post.htm#594252Fri, 08 May 2009 07:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:594252Grammar Geek1http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/2/hbccg/Post.htm#594252http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-594252.xmlI've never seen these, but #1 and #6 seem rather redundant, as do #3 and #4. However, I certain agree that complete, courteous, correct, and clear are important!http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/2/hbccg/Post.htm#594002Wed, 08 Apr 2009 07:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:594002d_say2http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/2/hbccg/Post.htm#594002http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-594002.xmlGreetings friends, My pleasure to let you knwo about 7 C's... complete concrete courteous considerate correctness completeness clarity We sould consider these " C's " before writing a letter. Hopefully you will get what i mean to say about. hmmm ! Thankooohttp://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/2/hbccg/Post.htm#593056Wed, 08 Apr 2009 07:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:593056ayumiyoshi13143http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/2/hbccg/Post.htm#593056http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-593056.xmlD_say GG is right! I completely forgot about those very important factors! I am sorry. Which 7 C's are you referring to? Yes which of them are you talking about.http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/2/hbccg/Post.htm#593051Fri, 08 May 2009 07:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:593051Grammar Geek4http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/2/hbccg/Post.htm#593051http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-593051.xmlWhich 7 C's are you referring to?http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#592671Sun, 08 Mar 2009 08:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:592671d_say5http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#592671http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-592671.xmlJee Jee , Thanks for your standpoint about this letter. Please note that I have just changed the symbol of currency which was in real Rupees instead of Dollars hence it made a confusion. I had guessed that friends of english forum will understand it easily inspite of considering the amount but now I realised in order to prepare a good letter we should carefully write and rewrite and rewrite. However as learning should be a part of life if we live with courage. I am amused as I learnt a big difference of 7 C's of business communication. Anyway thanks Jee Jee once again,http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590906Thu, 08 Jan 2009 08:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:590906Grammar Geek6http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590906http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-590906.xmlHi d_say, The reason I asked is that where I live, you don't write a letter for a loan. There are applications that include information like your income, your other current debt, and your assets. If you were requesting money as a loan from a relative, you would say what you want to use it for and how you proposed to pay it back. The amount you are requesting to borrow is very high. I've never borrowed so much except to purchase my house, so it seemed like it was more of a writing exercise than an genuine request for funding.http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590532Sun, 08 Feb 2009 08:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:590532d_say7http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590532http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-590532.xmlHi Ayumiyoshi1314 How come do you know that this was an actual request . Whata a prediction! Thanks :)http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590530Fri, 08 May 2009 07:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:590530d_say8http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590530http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-590530.xmlGood day my sweet fellows, Thank you all for your assistance. Please note this is a genuine case and in order to have some improvement in writing skills I have submitted my request for correction.http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590506Fri, 08 May 2009 07:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:590506Grammar Geek9http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590506http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-590506.xmlI think d_say needs to tell us that.http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590427Thu, 08 Jan 2009 08:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:590427ayumiyoshi131410http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590427http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-590427.xmlIs this an actual request for money or is this a writing assignment as a school project? An actual request.http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590386Fri, 08 May 2009 07:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:590386Grammar Geek11http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590386http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-590386.xmlIs this an actual request for money or is this a writing assignment as a school project?http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590384Sun, 08 Feb 2009 08:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:590384ayumiyoshi131412http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htm#590384http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-590384.xmlWould you please make correction if required in this letter ? Dear Sir, With due respect, I would like to inform you that I am in need of some urgent financial assistance. Please grant me $. 40,000/= (Dollars Forty thousand only) as a loan. I would therefore request you to please consider my request sympathetically. I would be very grateful to you for your kind attention and obliged. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, Include why you need financial assistance for if the one whom you are writing to reads the letter but does not the reason will be less likely to loan you any amount of money though your reason may be an important one. Also, $. 40,000/= (Dollars Forty thousand only), is an improper way to...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htmWed, 08 Apr 2009 07:45:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:590178d_say13http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApplicationForLoan/hbccg/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-590178.xmlWould you please make correction if required in this letter ? Subject: Request for Loan. Dear Sir, With due respect, I would like to inform you that I am in need of some urgent financial assistance. Please grant me $. 40,000/= (Dollars Forty thousand only) as a loan. I would therefore request you to please consider my request sympathetically. I would be very grateful to you for your kind attention and obliged. Thanking you, Yours faithfully,