http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetter-Writing/Forum5.htmFormal letter-writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, or invitation letter, CVs, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckPersonalStatement/wdgjr/post.htmMon, 09 Mar 2009 14:36:03 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:684794jdaniels0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckPersonalStatement/wdgjr/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-684794.xmlNormal 0 19 false false false LT X-NONE X-NONE MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Hello, I wrote this letter for international studies..I'd be very thankful if somebody could correct grammar and style in this letter. Thank you in advance :) I have always been fascinated about computer impact in our daily life. In this twenty first century no business organization can imagine its existance without computer related systems. I believe that as years go by this impact will become more and more significant not only in business organizations but also in everyone‘s life. I am convinced this degree would provide me with all the necessary information and skills...