http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetter-Writing/Forum5.htmFormal letter-writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, or invitation letter, CVs, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter.enXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/SponsorshipLetter/phmw/post.htm#382270Thu, 22 Jan 2009 17:48:24 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:382270Grammar Geek0http://www.englishforums.com/English/SponsorshipLetter/phmw/post.htm#382270http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-382270.xmlRuby, you need to draft the letter and post it for us to help. We don't draft letters. When you do draft it, you should probably start a new thread so that it will be easier for peope to see that you still need a response, rather than adding it to an existing thread.http://www.englishforums.com/English/SponsorshipLetter/phmw/post.htm#382264Sun, 22 Mar 2009 17:48:24 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:382264Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/SponsorshipLetter/phmw/post.htm#382264http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-382264.xmlHi I wonder if you could help me write a sponsorship letter for people to advertise on my website. My website is just new and would like to attract local businesses to advertise. It would be very much appreciated. Many thanks, Rubyhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/SponsorshipLetter/phmw/post.htm#76126Wed, 22 Apr 2009 16:48:24 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:76126nona the brit2http://www.englishforums.com/English/SponsorshipLetter/phmw/post.htm#76126http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-76126.xmlThis seems ok, just a couple of suggestions for you. Move the paragraph listing the benefits to their company (logo/stand etc) to the 2nd paragraph place. Can you call them in a few days instead of expecting them to call you?http://www.englishforums.com/English/SponsorshipLetter/phmw/post.htmSun, 22 Mar 2009 17:48:24 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:75930Guest3http://www.englishforums.com/English/SponsorshipLetter/phmw/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-75930.xmlThis is my first every rough draft of a sponsorship letter. I also have a club website (http://stw.ryerson.ca/~rocketry/) but I'm not really sure if I should place it in the letter somewhere. Any suggestions to this letter would be greatly appreciated. Thank you in advance since this is an anonymous post. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear (Name) I am writing to see if you and (Company Name) would be interested in sponsoring the members of the Ryerson Rocketry Club. The club will participate in upcoming local rocketry competitions, such as the annual ICARUS competition at University of Toronto and various NAPAS (North American Propulsion and Aerospace...