http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetter-Writing/Forum5.htmFormal letter-writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, or invitation letter, CVs, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htm#154877Thu, 26 Feb 2009 13:38:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:154877Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htm#154877http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-154877.xmlpls help me to write my personal statementhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htm#85630Mon, 26 Jan 2009 13:38:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:85630Sallynn1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htm#85630http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-85630.xmlhi, this is to let you know that I managed to work on the personal statement. Thank you for your willingness to help. Cheershttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htm#82085Tue, 26 May 2009 12:38:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:82085Guest2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htm#82085http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-82085.xmli need to write my personal statement for undergraduate courses.i intend to go for law or social work courses in the uk.am a mauritian.i badly need to send my ucas form as am already late enough.hope you will help me friend...the sooner the better!see ya!http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htm#81955Sun, 26 Apr 2009 12:38:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:81955Sallynn3http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htm#81955http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-81955.xmlbhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htm#81468Sun, 26 Apr 2009 12:38:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:81468Sallynn4http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htm#81468http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-81468.xmlThank you very for the your feedback. I will work on the letter according to your advise. I will post a copy soon.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htm#80394Sun, 26 Apr 2009 12:38:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:80394nona the brit5http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htm#80394http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-80394.xmlHi SallyAnn I think you need to organise your letter a little better. You are jumping around from subject to subject at the moment. Format your letter so they can find exactly what they are asking for. Pargraph one: goals (educational and career) paragraph two: motivation, and what sort of person are you? paragraph three: • Professional interests, Para four: other I would also remove a lot of the detail about your father.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htmMon, 26 Jan 2009 13:38:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:79656Sallynn6http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatementUndergraduate-Application/qdkl/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-79656.xmlThe applicant's personal statement should include: • motivation, • Professional interests, • And goals Be briefly described (one to two pages); • This personal statement may also contain aspects about oneself or of the work that are not apparent from the other application credentials Here is what i came up with but i think it is does not flow: your help will be highly appreciated My educational goal has been to achieve a degree in Marketing and eventually pursue my doctorate. My interest in Marketing originated from my father. A PhD degree holder in Marketing and Economics, he never ceased to emphasize the value of a good education to his 2 children. While I was in high school, my father worked as a Lecturer at the...