http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalGeneralBusinessLetter-Writing/Forum5.htmFormal letter-writing questions, how to write a cover letter, general, business, official, reference, character, leave, sponsorship, or invitation letter, CVs, writing to an English company, Learn how to start and end a letter.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/ReferenceInEnglish/brbhh/post.htmFri, 27 Mar 2009 08:15:11 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:83936Guest0http://www.englishforums.com/English/ReferenceInEnglish/brbhh/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments5-83936.xmlHi everybody. I wrote this reference. I need some help whether grammar and style are okay. It is very important for me because I am going to apply at an English university. I need your help. Thanks very much in advance. Berlin, March 25th, 2005 Reference To the application of Mr.xxx, Bachelor of Science, born at the xxx for studying a postgraduated Master of Science in Great Britain. Mr. xxx, Bachelor of Science, studied Corporate Environmental Informatics at the University of Applied Sciences in Berlin. He completed his studies with a Bachelor of Science degree. The degree was awarded with “2.2” and “good” respectively. The topic of Mr. xxx dissertation was “The conceptual development of software for the environmental...