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 could any one check my body paragraph about " hypertext fiction ",plz?? 
 i did already, but i need to improve it more because the teacher put many comments in it? 
 the teacher wants from me to fix the resources?? 
 i tried hard to express my opinin but the teacher said write more you opinion, so could u fix this problem too 
 the teacher commnt that i should i used a background based on length citation and my own analysis and voice is absent  
 Also, she wants from me to use APA for reference. and use MLE style 
 Thats all and wish your help.. 
 here the teacher doesnt want this introduction which underlined" First of all, I will talk about a hypertext poem "as a type of hypertext fiction which published in...</description></item></channel></rss>