I need a proof read before 11AM, 9/25/05

Jhansi — Sun, 25 Sep 2005 05:18:22 GMT

I've been going over this paragraph and I need a fresh eye.

The study examines the impact of the 1992 social upheaval in Los Angeles following the Rodney King verdict on artistic expression. Through contextualizing the issues of identity formation as influenced by the 1992 social upheaval in Los Angeles, the thesis explores how social, historical, and cultural ideas as influence by this event are formulated in the works of three Korean American artists: Y. David Chung, Sung Ho Choi and Yong Soon Min. A comparative analysis of their artworks, the utilization of the current scholarship, and data collected on the 1992 social upheaval in Los Angeles, are used in the analysis. Art production that is influence by lived experience yields a cultural and historical specificity that will contribute to the ongoing project of dialogic racialization that goes beyond the space where the Korean American is merely an interpolation in the American racial imagery.

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The installation by Sung Ho Choi entitled Choiâs Market is a replica of a burnt-out store front. The architectural elements composed of distressed wood consists of a door with a window, two window panes on each side of the door and shelves below each set of window panes. Various types of live plants and one watering are positioned on the shelves on each side. On the window of the door, the artist placed a collage that consists of a black and white photograph of two adults each holding a child that is layered on top of lottery tickets. The letters âMERICâ are faintly visible above the figures on the photograph. The photograph is presumably that of a family wearing tailored clothing. The positioning of the photograph gives the illusion that the figures depicted on the collage are inside this fabricated edifice. The green, yellow, and red colors of the plants contrast the background of the muted colors of the distressed wood and the black and white collage. The fabricated damage to the awning obscures the numbers 429 that are situated on the left side, which might indicate the storeâs address. Next to the number 429, the words Choiâs Market are prominently positioned at the center. The way in which the wood has been distressed with black paint and the fabricated erosion on the awning suggests fire damage on the store front.chemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />>>

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I need a proof read before 11AM, 9/25/05