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Re: Please correct my essay!

Anonymous — Fri, 04 Nov 2005 08:58:47 GMT

Thank you for correcting my work. [: D]

Re: Please correct my essay!

Savvysavz — Wed, 02 Nov 2005 15:56:39 GMT

Your title should be: What makes a good doctor

Medical treatment is a meticulous occupation .(delete Because) Being healthy is desired by every man,so a doctor should treat carefully and responsibly.A doctor not only handles diseases but also human lives.Hence a good doctor is essential for our social (social what?).

A ''good doctor'' should have two characteristics : Physical and Mental .The physical characteristic can improve your skill in medicine and make you more reliable.In other words,physical characteristics include not only competency and smartness but also strength,health and hygiene.Mental characteristics are also important because if you have good mental characteristics,you will promptly improve your practising skills.A Good doctor must have both characteristics due to work efficiency( due to heavy work load is better).Mental characteristics consist of several factors such as compassion,commitment,honesty, empathy etc.

A Man who wants to be a good doctor rarely has all of the above characteristics.So these characteristics have to be implemented .Physical characteristics can be fostered by further practicing ,reading books,consulting professors and involving in some related research.(delete Moreover,)Mental characteristics can be fostered by meditation,consulting friends and reading ("How to" doesn't go well here. find something else)books.

Re: Please correct my essay!

Savvysavz — Wed, 02 Nov 2005 15:22:06 GMT

Hi Anonymous,

Welcome to the forums.We will correct your essay, however you have posted it in the wrong thread.Henceforth, please submit your essays in the writing section. Thank you.

Regards,

Savvy

Please correct my essay!

Anonymous — Wed, 02 Nov 2005 13:33:07 GMT

How can someome become a good doctor

Doctor is always important occupation . Because being healthy is desired by every man.So doctor should work carefully and responsibly.Doctor not only handle the disease but also the Life.Then good doctor is essential for our social.

A characteristic which " good doctor" should have is divided into 2 parts: Physical and Mental charateristics.Physical characteristic can improve your skill in medicine and make you more reliable.In other hands,physical characteristics include not only competence,smart but also strength,health and hygiene.Mental characteristics is also important because if you have good mental characteristics,you will promptly to improve and practice skills.Good doctor must have both characteristics due to work efficient.Mental characteristics consisted of many things such as compassion,commitment,honesty and empathy etc.

Man who want to be a good doctor rarely have all of characteristics.So the improvement is necessary.Physical characteristics can improve by more practicing,reading book,consulting professor,searching some related research.Moreover,mental characteristics ccould improve by meditation,consulting friends and reading "How to"books.

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