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Re: the person you love most

Lynnlin — Tue, 03 Jan 2006 04:11:05 GMT

LanguageLover wrote:

First of all, never ever forget about CAPITAL LETTERS, they are your companions in the English world wherever you go.

And then, some of your sentences need to be rephrased to a better one. For example, we do not say my mum is a powerful woman in cooking, but My mum is (very/really,...) good at cooking, or something like that.

Hi you are very kind.

I like all the people in the world (except devils)

Re: the person you love most

LanguageLover — Mon, 02 Jan 2006 15:35:19 GMT

First of all, never ever forget about CAPITAL LETTERS, they are your companions in the English world wherever you go.

And then, some of your sentences need to be rephrased to a better one. For example, we do not say my mum is a powerful woman in cooking, but My mum is (very/really,...) good at cooking, or something like that.

hello my sis..

Aziha — Mon, 02 Jan 2006 14:23:53 GMT

Hi there..

Same as u, I also love my mum.. She is a very very important person in my life. Without her, my life is very empty..

Honestly, I love my mum, I love my father and my entire family..

Re: the person you love most

YoHf — Wed, 14 Dec 2005 22:02:17 GMT

We know it... ^^

Re: the person you love most

Dj Bueno — Wed, 14 Dec 2005 20:20:57 GMT

lol no doubt,I love the Eng.F. members as well..

Re: the person you love most

YoHf — Wed, 14 Dec 2005 20:00:14 GMT

What about me?

Re: the person you love most

Dj Bueno — Mon, 12 Dec 2005 22:53:58 GMT

after the family members..I can say "my dearest English teacher"..

the person you love most

Tulip_imah — Mon, 12 Dec 2005 02:33:58 GMT

hello there.i am pretty sure that in our life, there is a person that you love most.even once in your life, there is must be one person that you love, and of course my mum is the person that i love most.there is no word how to express my feeling towards my mum. she has eight children include me and i am a third child.my parents had separated long years ago and we used to live with our mother.i am so impressed with her courage to raise us till we succeed.sometimes,i keep wondering how she managed to raise us without a help from someone that called husband.eventhough without a husband,she managed to survive and seems like my mum`s life is better without a husband.when i am grown enough to understand about this life,i realised the hard times that my mum faces as a single mother.in our society,the people are still looking down at single mothers.they think this kind of people is a bad woman.but my mum managed to overcome with that situation and i can see now how respects people are to my mum.

my mum is a powerful woman in cooking.she can cook anything that you wish to eat and she likes to cook very much.hari raya is the most pleasure times to us.my mum will ask us what we want to eat during the raya morning.what makes it funny is,we have to vote for the food because my siblings want to eat the different dishes.the majority will wins.her cooking that i like most is nasi lemak.

my mum is a secondary school geography teacher and i know how busy she is with her job.as times goes by,she keeps busy with her job and we rarely can drawn together to talk and share our problems.however, she is very concern with our study.she will make sure that her children do their best in studies.sometimes,when we do not managed to get a good result in our exam,she will not punish us,but encourage us to do better than that.i love this characteristic of my mum cause as we can see now,parents just know how to blame and punish their children when they do not managed to get a good result in exam,but they never try to find out what the problems are.

now i am studying in a college as a tesl student.i used to love to be an english teacher since my childhood.my mum never object with my ambition and encourage me to do my best to become a good english teacher.my mum,a very supportive person, will always become a queen of my heart.